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Popped up Peps!

Updated on September 16, 2014

point!

petit...

  • Gangrenous love

Of my gangling life

Garred

In me

A gap-toothed gangrel!


  • Winnowing

All worrying weeds

Weaved I

The fabric of my life

For

A wealthy weal!


  • Ruddy-faced

Rueful ruffian

Rowed over

A royal rebuke

And reprimand!


  • A cockney-dialected

Cocky cobber

Of mine

Was cocksure

That

The cockles of his heart

Cocooned

A coarse cob!


  • An eloquent elixir

Eagerly

Embarked on

An enterprising elimination

Of the eligibility test

For an elitist!

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      Amie Butchko 3 years ago from Warwick, NY

      I feel like I want to study this! Will have to read over and over... Very melodic.

    • kidscrafts profile image

      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Love your play with the sounds! But I don't get the picture :-)

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanku ami n kid

      lk popping eyes

      regards

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      So funny, sujaya. Loved this verse:

      "A cockney-dialected

      Cocky cobber

      Of mine

      Was cocksure

      That

      The cockles of his heart

      Cocooned

      A coarse cob!"

      It almost sounds 'Aussie'.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      really thanx jo

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Love your sense of humor here!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thank u aud for encouraging

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