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Precious Moments That We All Share

Updated on January 5, 2011

I just Want To Hold On To This Moment A Little Longer

I can't explain it

But the feeling is there

My emotions have gotten the best of me

I am nothing more than a puddle after a hard rain

I hold you in my arms and I feel your magnetism

I don't wish to pull away EVER

But I know as soon as these words were said it could no longer be true or possible

I see your simple but delicate frame

Laying still and quite comfortable just being here with me

I think to myself which is something I do often

I am the luckiest man alive

I have a woman who knows what love is all about

Here in my little world

I have great gratitude and acceptance for everythig in my life

I have lived it and have traveled many of miles to finally get where I am

I understand what blessings are and how our simple love radiates from each other

This moment is not about words that I have used every day of my life

It is about feeling home

The freedom of tenderness and weakness and ultimate vunerability

I am home

I am safe

I am where I want to be

My mind has never been more sharp and focused

My body is at perfect ease

I thought making love was the cats meow

Now I hold my wife firm but gentle

I know this is one of those moments

Where all my expressions of love have risen to the top

Like the way bubbles do in soda

Non stop

This is a breath taking moment that has been captured

Not in film but in my mind for it to share with you

Not in words that many have expressed so magnificiently over the ages

Mine is in thought

The emotional ties that bond us together as one

My senses are off the charts

I can't even begin to start to explain

I haven't learned the words for this attraction

That satisfies my soul and leaves my common sense left open for questioning

How could this moment be so special

When I can't even hear her heart beat but I know it's beating

I am closer than I have ever been to anyone in my whole life

Each attempt I try to explain my deepest feelings I come up short

How could it be that I have not learned the simple uncomplicated unsophisticated Love

I am experiencing it for the first time

Sure I am the first one to dive into the heat of passion

But for this very moment

I feel my body frozen in time

I have found the secret combination of her love

One so powerful that it penetrates my unforseen thoughts

Rich in detail and abundant as the air that surrounds me


Some things in life you will never be able to explain and this is one of those times that ring the bell constantly


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Nelllieanna When I see your writings and your comments you are so affluent and wise.It is my honor to talk to you at each moment.I am so happy you understand my ideas.I have been known to go overboard and then a life perserver couldn't save me.Thanks for sharing.We have a wonderful new year ahead of us and I wish you all the good health and happiness one could ever want.For me I am enjoying seeing others happy and that really makes me so satisfied.I should want so much more.I think when you have your health and you see someone else that doesn't you realize you do have much more than you could ever want.Well here is to better writings and wonderful friends!!!

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      Nellieanna Hay 7 years ago from TEXAS

      My pleasure! You have so much HEART, Dream On. I love to see what you write next. It is always something you feel deeply. Sometimes it may be a passing feeling, but while you feel it, you are totally "IN" it and that is how people should be! Nothing defines us more than our honest unedited feelings and when we can express them, it is a real joy!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Nellieanna Sometimes it takes awhile for us to see.It might be the sun in our eyes or we are sleepy and we are not awake yet.It doesn't matter the reason as long as you get the same outcome.Thank you so much for all your help and constant support.

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      Nellieanna Hay 7 years ago from TEXAS

      This is just "it". You've found it. Thanks for sharing it.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Kirutaye You have taken my plain vertical lines on the computer and have given them a special home where they can reamerge many times and come and go with a new purpose and a new love.Thank you so much.

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      kirutaye 7 years ago from London, UK

      "I haven't learned the words for this attraction

      That satisfies my soul and leaves my common sense left open for questioning"

      My friend, you have articulated your love quite eloquently in this you poem. Well done. :o))

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Carrie450 I am experiencing love in it's softest and sweetest moments.I can't let this moment go without trying to embrace it fully.Dr. Irum I show another way to see beauty that my eyes have missed.Joy56 Yes finally I will thaw out and get on with my day.Christmas was relaxing and interesting in many ways.I hope yours went well.Rhonda Waits Sometimes life throws us many unexpected surprises in our path.They can be the greatest things I have ever experienced which I try to live over and over in my head.Other times not so nice when I find myself returning back to these moments and they can carry me through until I am so happy again.I feel as long as my heart is in the right place everything in my life will finally catch up sooner or later.I am glad to share my life and true loves with all of you.Thanks for all your wonderful encouragement and friendship that gives my writings purpose and a place in this vast world we live.

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      Rhonda Musch 7 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      This was very touching and inspirational. When we find this love of our life, we need to hang on tight. Beautiful.

      DREAM ON you are always a pleasure to read. Live life and be happy.

      Your friend Rhonda.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      are you still frozen in time????? you survived the Christmas festivities?????

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      Dr irum 7 years ago

      Its wonderful poem on precious moments .

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      carrie450 7 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

      A very beautiful touching poem DREAM ON. It was a pleasure to read.