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Precious Moments (poem)

Updated on October 10, 2013

So precious were the moments which we set

Each dream a wondrous footprint in the sand

What memories were cast in lovers’ net

As stars forever strolled within our hand

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We walked the ways of ever’s golden mist

To fashion fruit which fell from magic’s tree

Such splendors surged from serenades we kissed

Our dances formed a new reality

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Beyond beyond was set our river’s flow

We were the light of meaning up ahead

A promise which would never let this go

And lighten every unknown tear we shed

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So here my life and reason pledge to stay

To make a precious moment of today

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Yes, we must make the most of every moment. Very beautifully said.

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      Kari Shinal 4 years ago from Seligman AZ

      It is a struggle at times, moving moment by moment, creating memories in rhyme, as what I choose to comment. Thanks Martin

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Life is so short, we need to make each day meaningful and precious. I great piece.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A wonderful poem Martin. Voted up and shared.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing. There are just moments to live for.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Each day is filled with precious moments and it's up to us to use them in the right way. Such a beautiful poem.

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      Marlene Bertrand 4 years ago from Northern California, USA

      Tender romance. Loved it!

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      passionate77 4 years ago

      ohhhhhh soooooooooooo lovely and heart touching words you shared mhatter dear, enjoyed a lot going all through this sweet poetic expression of special memories. blessings dear!

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Wow, a hub doesn't get more romantic than this. I love the beautiful video to go with it. Memories are so important to hold onto. Great write my friend.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I particularly like this one, Martin.

      Simply complex with a music score to accompany the passion.

      DJ.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm feeling withdrawals from the limericks. If you are still writing them I'm not getting them. Oh well, this was again beautiful my friend.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Any moment can be special so well thought of

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Lovely memories expressed and passionate music.

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper