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Precious Moments (poem)

Updated on October 10, 2013

So precious were the moments which we set

Each dream a wondrous footprint in the sand

What memories were cast in lovers’ net

As stars forever strolled within our hand


We walked the ways of ever’s golden mist

To fashion fruit which fell from magic’s tree

Such splendors surged from serenades we kissed

Our dances formed a new reality


Beyond beyond was set our river’s flow

We were the light of meaning up ahead

A promise which would never let this go

And lighten every unknown tear we shed


So here my life and reason pledge to stay

To make a precious moment of today


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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Yes, we must make the most of every moment. Very beautifully said.

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      Kari Shinal 4 years ago from AZ

      It is a struggle at times, moving moment by moment, creating memories in rhyme, as what I choose to comment. Thanks Martin

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Life is so short, we need to make each day meaningful and precious. I great piece.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A wonderful poem Martin. Voted up and shared.

      Enjoy your day.


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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing. There are just moments to live for.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Each day is filled with precious moments and it's up to us to use them in the right way. Such a beautiful poem.

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      Marlene Bertrand 4 years ago from USA

      Tender romance. Loved it!

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      passionate77 4 years ago

      ohhhhhh soooooooooooo lovely and heart touching words you shared mhatter dear, enjoyed a lot going all through this sweet poetic expression of special memories. blessings dear!

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Wow, a hub doesn't get more romantic than this. I love the beautiful video to go with it. Memories are so important to hold onto. Great write my friend.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I particularly like this one, Martin.

      Simply complex with a music score to accompany the passion.


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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm feeling withdrawals from the limericks. If you are still writing them I'm not getting them. Oh well, this was again beautiful my friend.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Any moment can be special so well thought of

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Lovely memories expressed and passionate music.

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper