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Prettier Please

Updated on January 7, 2011

 

O violent wind carry the

To those stitched hearts seem's

Thy cold rain they beg for thee

They scream fall down upon me

Then your ending momentarily

Lightening we say to thee

Strike down upon we

Till patience is received

Chemicals that enhance

They beg for your release

Suffering beginning

And ending

Then beginning again.

Giving tree they beg

Give to them thy fruit

In exchange for nothing

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    • Entwinds profile image

      Entwinds 7 years ago

      I love the use of words

      My eyes absorbed the words.

      Great..

    • Deborah Demander profile image

      Deborah Demander 7 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      There is a lot of passion in this poem.

      Namaste.

    • Joy56 profile image

      Joy56 7 years ago

      lovely................

    • prey profile image

      prey 7 years ago from places you should hope we never meet

      what about in exchange for me?

      beautiful, truly moving

      so proud to call u a friend

      thank you for sharing another piece of art

      kiss

      preY

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      truster 7 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      Interesting ;)

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      xo

      beautiful as usual

      xo

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 7 years ago

      it dosen't get any prettier than this - but then again as a poet you're 'awfully' good!

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You All For Stopping By

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