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Promise to make an Eden – the poem

Updated on June 19, 2013
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Do not try to deceive me please

I want to die as long as feelings can feel,

Please never try to hurt me

I wish I can snatch the mask to reveal.

Fake words and tricks to trick me

Only if you would have known the precision,

Dear, it is a matter of your time

Barely infusing in earthy hue to rise recession.

A cycle of never ending dilemma

Just to chase a silhouette of magma so frosty,

Do not try to allure me into oblivion

A suicide of dogma creates propaganda lofty.

The game of words and promises

A dull ramification of novice attempt to sell my soul,

Then you think that I won’t understand?

My brain has to be killed first to quiet the inner howl.

Merely the sky is dancing a ballet of corona

Never try in vain to lay me a story so elusive,

Colours shown the reflection in lucid arena

Handle with care as the fragile is effort fugitive.

A mask so full with paradox

Do not you feel tired of own drama so empty?

Hollow is the existence of pretext

Life revolves a protest of exchanged vanity.

Mirror is a monotonous sepia memoir

For you sold humanity without meagre coherence,

Murder of the reason in every corner

Mankind is hiding face in ethereal cloak pretence.

Then the core of being is gang rapped

For a mere weekend entertainment phenomena,

A single eyelid is not even be flickered

Just a further rape of soul and civilization iota.

Do you still remember …..

Your promises of a blue pure sky above…..

A promise of simple laughter of free birds

Promise of flowers to bloom bright….

Days of pure happiness abound ….

Life to be lived abundance in equality

A Garden of Eden with Adams and Eves

The apples to be tasted with rationality…

But why such meandering trail of frailty?

In reply an echo to be resonant…

Promises are made only to be broken….!

Deciphering the code of conduct….

Never make a promise of another Eden so far!

Never again you please try to sell a lie

The smiles will be dead with that income forever.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      True, true. Thank you for this. At least for me.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for your kind comment here and you are always welcome.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      I really love reading this, I've read it twice, and on each read there is so much more. Eden can be a very elusive place to find.

      Brilliant!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks@tobusiness......Eden is elusive place but very much in all our mind that we try to find out and run after all our life. If only we know what we should value most to be at inner peace and to feel the highest love. Many thanks again for appreciating my work. God bless you

      deergha

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Wow what a writing of visuals, I have seen none this intense. Very good.

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      I know so many breakers of promises on all levels. They just don't realize that by breaking only two promises in a row - and sometimes only one - they put themselves forever in another's low estimation.

      Every phrase is a story. Voted up!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Jackie.....its much pleasure to have your kind visit and view here. I am happy that you liked this poem.

      Deergha

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      Dear MartieCoetser......You are very much rite here. People who breaks promises never care to think may be how the other person feels by it and what they go through. Thanks you for your visit, view and votes also. Take care

      Deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely relationships often get ruined by broken promises. You've woven a lovely tapestry with words here and loved the pics. Passing this on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for your kind words here dear Gypsy. You are rite, promises after making if not maintained then it hurts deep within leaving a scar unbearable. I am happy the way you related with my feelings. God bless you always.

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      sweetie1 4 years ago from India

      You look hurt but You definitely got gift of writing poems. Looks like you have put your deep thoughts on paper. Very nicely written poem . voting up

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear, Its just some fleeting feelings and I have put down in paper which you are honoring by naming as poem may be. I am glad that you liked my work so far. Thanks you very much for your kind visit here sweetie1 and your votes are also much appreciated. take care and God bless you always.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      No one can hurt us quite as deeply as those who steal our hearts. Why then, do they hurt us the most? This is an emotional read for me and I was instantly affected by the deep poetic pleading for the hurt to stop, for the promises to be kept instead of broken.....

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      uhhh...its indeed a pleasure to go ahead and take the effort to put feelings in to words and then write something,,,,,when one is blessed with friends such as YOU dear shiningirisheyes........I am thankful to God always. Thank you for your precious view here.

      Hope you have a great weekend ahead :-)

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