ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Prose - Dreaming To Live

Updated on May 1, 2011

Where no voice
Will resonate
And no candle
Can illuminate
You exist
Telling me to hush
My longing
As I rush
To bed
Once again
Leaving the world
And my pain
Of separation
From all I seek
Living day to day
Week to week
Without you
Wandering
With others
Kissed
By fate
Life laughingly
Dangling my mate
Before closed eyes
Offering a glimpse
Unblinking
A relapse
Of hope
As reality drives
Towards a morning
I hope never arrives
Wake me not
For love cannot see
When all you have
Are dreamscapes to believe
Will you be there
Tonight?
As dusk gathers itself
Devouring the light
All questions
To be answered by you
My dream lover
Do you long for me too?






Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • The Suburban Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Mark Lecuona 

      7 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Johnny - thanks for the comment man.... it's inside me like everyone else... sometimes the dream is just for that perfect someone who is still wandering looking for you...

    • profile image

      Johnny Love 

      7 years ago

      Love the depth of your passion to feel what dreams of love have inside. Beautifully written.

    • The Suburban Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Mark Lecuona 

      7 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @acaetnna - thank you... perfect? Hardly but I truly appreciate you saying that...

    • acaetnna profile image

      acaetnna 

      7 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh this is so perfect. An awesome piece of prose. Voting up and awesome, beautiful too. Well done, I love your writing.

    • The Suburban Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Mark Lecuona 

      7 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @duffsmom - thank you... this is a stylish component to the form I guess but I've evolved into a manner of communicating that attempts to get your attention in this ADD world with short bursts that while sparse contain much emotional impact. Hopefully then the reader craves the next line.

      @Teylina - thank you again for your kind remarks. Dreamscape seemed to be the right word for the middle of the night dream that leaves a hazy memory for the morning. I like this style and will continue to use it...

      @attemptedhumour - Thanks man... don't be jealous dude!

      @chspublish - thank you! We all have that longing at times. Some have that person by their side; others are still searching....

    • chspublish profile image

      chspublish 

      7 years ago from Ireland

      Your words cut right to heart of where we live in dreams and hope. Perfect!

    • attemptedhumour profile image

      attemptedhumour 

      7 years ago from Australia

      Well, the ladies love this one SP, but i'm just jealous. Nice one though.

    • Teylina profile image

      Teylina 

      7 years ago

      Since first heard the coined "dreamscapes" years ago, it's always conjoured a passage of time for me. This was beautifully written. Like duffsmom, I like the style here--not sure which grabbed me more: how you wrote or what you wrote or, more probably, how you wrote what you wrote. For me, one of your best. Thank you.

    • duffsmom profile image

      P. Thorpe Christiansen 

      7 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      I love the style of this. The way you have written it, with no stanza breaks and no punctuation, drives the reader forward, with no chance for a breath--and so when reading it creates a feeling of anticipation and movement. Well done!

    • The Suburban Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Mark Lecuona 

      7 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Lady_Tenaz - thank you for reading and being so nice...

      @Cheryl J. - goosebumps!?! My work is done here!

      @Cogerson - Thank you for commenting. I truly appreciate it....

      @Nan - thank you again for commenting and your kind remarks!

    • profile image

      Nan Mynatt 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful and very poetic!

    • Cogerson profile image

      UltimateMovieRankings 

      7 years ago from Virginia

      awesome writing, I really enjoyed reading your poem...voted up and beautiful

    • Cheryl J. profile image

      Cheryl J. 

      7 years ago from Houston, TX

      Awesome. I have goosebumps. Keep up the nice writing. Great hub.

    • profile image

      Lady_Tenaz 

      7 years ago

      WOW! That was a good one! As always your words always captivate! Voted up!

    working

    This website uses cookies

    As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

    For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

    Show Details
    Necessary
    HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
    LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
    Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
    AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
    Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
    CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
    Features
    Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
    Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
    Marketing
    Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
    Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
    Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
    Statistics
    Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
    ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)