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Prose - Inside You

Updated on July 31, 2011
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I’m ready
To be inside you
Inside your life
Inside your mind
Inside your body

I’m ready
To feel you
Feel your life
Feel your mind
Feel your body

I want your passion
Let me give you mine
When you look at me
Can you hear my mind?

Can you?
I am calling for you
I will set you free
As no other man can do

I’m ready
To join you
Join your life
Join your mind
Join your body

I want your passion
Let me give you mine
When you look at me
Can you feel my mind?

Can you?
I'm going crazy for you
I will set you free
As you dreamed I would do

Yes I am the answer
I am no longer a fantasy
I am the man you want
What's real will be our ecstasy

I want to look deep inside
I want to see who you are
I want you to let me go inside
Where no man has been before

I’m ready
To love you
Love your life
Love your mind
Love your body

Yes I want to make love to you
All day and all night
Yes I want to make love to you
Your fire I will ignite

I’m ready baby
Can you let go?
I’m ready baby
I’m telling you so
I’m ready baby
Will you hold back?
I’m ready baby
This is no act

Let me whisper
And tell you what I want
Let me whisper
And tell you what I will do
Let me whisper
So you can forget your fears
Let me whisper
And tell you how beautiful you are
Let me whisper
And tell you how you make me feel
Let me whisper
I will never hold back
Let me whisper
And tell you I love you
Let me whisper
Until my voice drowns in our passion

I’m ready
To be inside you
Will you take me in?
Will you take my life?
Will you take my mind?
Will you take my body?
Will you?
I’m ready


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    • Teylina profile image

      Teylina 5 years ago

      Absolute perfection. Mind if I forward it? Hah. Truly beautiful - with or without music

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Teylina - Thank you... of course you can forward it or whatever... it's out there for the world now... I really appreciate your kind remarks.

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      Teylina 5 years ago

      It's just very, very real, and very, very beautifully straightforward--truly a gem. Thank you for writing.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Only one word here; beautiful,

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 5 years ago from Boston, MA

      Reminds me of my poem "I'm waiting"

      This is my kind of poem, straight forward, romantic and direct LOL!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Simply perfect, this is what love is all about!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Teylina - thank you. What can I say but let you know you are too kind. It's pillow talk...

      @Eiddwen - Thank you... I truly appreciate it...

      @blondey - It is direct. But not crass I hope... it communicates to you what I want but maybe some of it is told only by my eyes in real life...

      @acaetnna - Thank you! I'm always happy to see you here when I write about love...

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      schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA

      LOVE the pictures, just bookmarked it.......you think like I do, LOL!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @schoolgirlforreal - Thanks... I was trying to find some pictures that weren't pornographic and it was a bit of a challenge...

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      JJ (Lady Tenaz) 5 years ago

      OMG...so steamy! I need a cold shower now! lol GOOD POEM!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @JJ - Look's like my work here is done.... Ha....

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      Alexander Props 5 years ago

      This is great.

      So direct.

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Alexander - Thank you for commenting and the nice remark. I tried to put it in the way that I would possibly talk without sounding too crass and without making her burst out into laughter...

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Lovely and beautiful your passion my friend. Always a pleasure to feel your words.

      Johnny Love

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @JadedLove - thank you for the nice comment. This is a straight-forward but hopefully classy expression to a woman... it's time to let ourselves go, you know?

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      I am inadvertently in lust with you! Your words are amazing! You NEVER need to worry about a woman bursting into laughter when it comes to words like this. Any woman would be flattered. Another amazing hub! Up and beautiful!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Mamadrama - Sorry for taking so long to respond on this one. Keep the lust alive! Ha! I appreciate your comments.... what man wouldn't?

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      :) That's sweet thank you~Alive and burning baby.. Keep Writing! Brilliant!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      I will... it's a plague on my mind and mankind I tell you!!!!! I can't stop! Help me!!!!

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      V Qisya 5 years ago

      Whoa, I'm burning! Love it!

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @V Qisya - Hey! I'm glad you liked it... I mean every word I say....

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      haikutwinkle 5 years ago

      simple and beautiful ;)

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @haikutwinkle - Thank you!

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      AI-YIYI!!! this is just over the top!! Beautiful, elegant. so very sensuous the very words cause reactions in the pit of my stomach! Voted Up, Awesome, Beautiful, Interesting, and Sharing. I think if a woman found a man who expressed himself like this he'd end up with an ankle monitor and never be allowed to see the light of day! lol

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      The Suburban Poet 4 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Hi d. Juris - Sorry I took so long to respond. Ha ha... no ankle monitors please! But if you are the perfect girl then you can trust the butterfly to return each night....

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