ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Sally and The Glass Box - Flash Fiction

Updated on April 6, 2016
Nell Rose profile image

Flash Fiction - Sweet old people, don't you just love them?.....Nell writes short stories that always have a sneaky twist, read on....

Girl
Girl | Source

'Jeesh, what a headache! What the hell have I been doing? Sally reached up with her right hand and touched her forehead. It felt okay, slightly cool but sticky with a strange feeling to it. 'What the hell...?' She opened her eyes but it was pitch black. 'Is it still night? She thought.

She tried to turn her head but for some reason it was locked solid into position. 'Oh my God! I must have had an accident but why aren't there any lights on?

'Don't panic, just don't start hyperventilating, you know what you are like when you get in a state'. But then Sally realised that actually she didn't know.

In fact she couldn't even remember the day before, where she lived or what her name was!

Had someone abducted her? She couldn't remember.

'Breath, come on breath'. She thought, trying to get her breath. 'If I faint now I am done for'!


in the dark
in the dark | Source

'Think, what is the last thing I remember?' Sally tried to think, but her head felt strange, as though it was full of cotton wool. 'Okay, lets try touch, what can I feel?' She tried to reach as far as possible without jarring her head, but it was difficult. Then...

'Okay, what the hell is that?' She thought, reaching out and touching something cold. 'Glass, its glass!'

Running her fingers round the space she realised with a sense of horror that she was surrounded by it, front, back and sides. Nothing but glass.

'I must be dreaming, this cannot be happening to me. Where am I, who is doing this to me?' 'Scream, just scream someone will have to come and help me'.

Taking a deep breath Sally yelled as loud as she could.

'HELP ME, SOMEONE HELP ME.......'

But nothing happened. No one came. Darkness enveloped her and she started to cry.

'I want to go home' She wailed. 'Someone, anyone, please please help...'

Slowly she became calmer. 'Okay there must be some explanation, if I try to sit up more maybe that will tell me what's happening'.

Sally tried to pull herself up. But as she reached down to pull the bed clothes off, she realised something strange.

'Why can't I feel my body?' It was there, but draped in some sort of strange material. 'What's going on?'

Girl in a glass box
Girl in a glass box | Source

Sweat began to form on her forehead and drip down into her eyes. Her breathing became shallow, and she could feel a scream bubbling up from her sternum.

'I need to get out of here, but where the hell is here?' Reaching out, Sally tried punching the glass, but it was too strong and too solid. All she could hear was a muffled noise as her hand hit it. She tried wiggling her feet but for some reason she couldn't feel them either.

That sent panic shooting up through her body. 'Why can't I feel my feet? I must be in some sort of life support system, that's it, they are trying to save my life!'

Sally leaned back and tried to relax. She realised that there must be a good reason for it all.

Suddenly she heard a noise, and trying to turn her head to see where it came from, all she could do was move her eyes. There! Over in the corner of the room there appeared a light beneath the door. It was a door! 'Phew, someone at last'! She thought and took a shuddering breath.

The door opened and two men walked in, both wearing overalls and carrying mechanical equipment.


man in the dark
man in the dark | Source

'Over here Steve, just put it...yeah that will do'. The two men started unravelling what looked like a roll of thick wire.

Sally reached out and tapped on the glass. 'Help me! She whispered, her voice choking, please help me'.

'What the hell was that?' Steve asked the other guy who's name was Tom. 'Dunno mate, rats?' He replied.

'No, its coming from that box over there'. Steve walked over towards where Sally was trying desperately to see out of the glass.

''Oh thank God'! She yelled, 'Help me'!

Steve grabbed the glass box and stood it up against the wall. Sally banged on the glass again and stared at Steve with a look of anguish on her face.

'What's that?' Tom asked.

Steve burst out laughing.

'My God, they make them lifelike these days'!!

'What?'

These new Robots made for the Robotic Fortune Teller stall at the festival, this is one of the first in the series to be as lifelike as possible. Some say that they even have their own mind and memories! But I think its just reaction to movement, bit like those sensors when you walk past something, did scare me a bit though, and she does look so real doesn't she'?

Steve and his companion stood back and watched as Psychic Sally the new line in Robotics stared back at them in horror. As they pushed a button on her box Sally leaned forward, and without being able to stop went into automatic.


'Can I help you boys? What question would you like to ask Sally?'

Inside she was screaming.....'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO'

'


Robots v Humans

I hope you liked my story. This isn't so far fetched. Japan seems to be leading the world with their super human looking Robots. In fact they look and act so real it takes a second to realise that you are looking at a robot!

We have all seen the films. And it doesn't seem to be that far off before we are coming face to face with these robot humanoids.

Scary stuff eh?

Just think, if they look sound and feel like humans, will they have memories too? One day the line will be broken between humans and robots. I just hope they know what they are doing!

copyright nell rose

Human looking robot
Human looking robot | Source

© 2016 Nell Rose

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • ValKaras profile image

      Vladimir Karas 13 months ago from Canada

      Nell - Just the other night I watched an episode of "Ancient Aliens" that came up with this idea that alien visitors of the distant past could have been robots, not "real ETs" flesh and green blood. Then they supported that speculation with Japanese latest models of humanoid robots.

      A great hub you wrote Nell. Something to think about.

    • Sunshine625 profile image

      Linda Bilyeu 13 months ago from Orlando, FL

      Wow! I was feeling anxious while reading! Well done, Nell. Very powerful and descriptive! :)

    • rebeccamealey profile image

      Rebecca Mealey 13 months ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Nice job, Nell! I enjoyed that little story. Futuristic and an entertaining quick read. You helped me grasp the concept of flash fiction with this one!

    • DreamerMeg profile image

      DreamerMeg 13 months ago from Northern Ireland

      That was a real horror story! I could imagine that happening.

    • Faith Reaper profile image

      Faith Reaper 13 months ago from southern USA

      Awesome flash fiction, Nell. The ending was unexpected which a good sign of a great flash fiction. This one kept one on edge.

      It is scary these robots are so lifelike ...will they take over one day?

    • phoenix2327 profile image

      Zulma Burgos-Dudgeon 13 months ago from United Kingdom

      Scary stuff. I've seen videos of robots that mimic human movement and speech. The thought of them actually becoming sentient is a disturbing one.

    • Venkatachari M profile image

      Venkatachari M 13 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very scary story, until it got revealed that she is a robotic human. I wonder can robots feel and imagine themselves as humans. Very good imagination and creation on your part. Enjoyed from starting to end.

    • DDE profile image

      Devika Primić 13 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Hi Nell you certainly surprised with this hub!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi ValKaras, Wow that's amazing! I will have to watch out for that episode, and thanks so much for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi LInda, thanks so much and glad you liked it, I needed to write my own thing, been a while! lol!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks rebecca, lol! I had to look up flash fiction to make sure I titled it right! its just another word for short story really, well only shorter and quicker, thanks for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Meg, thanks so much! and yes scary stuff that could happen in the future, japan is so far advanced with these, thanks, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Faith, hope not! lol! one day someone will think, 'well maybe if I insert concsiousness....'! arghhhh! lol! thanks as always, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi phoenix, yes its pretty horrible isn't it? can you imagine a real life sentient being like that, how awful! lol! thanks so much for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Venkatachari, thanks so much! I just got the idea in my head and thought, wow! now I wonder what would happen? etc. thanks, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi DDE, thanks so much, glad you liked it, nell

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 13 months ago from Shelton

      my goodness Nell Rose.. this was so relevant and an eye-opening short story.. loved it!!!!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks so much Frank, glad you liked it, nell

    • savvydating profile image

      savvydating 13 months ago

      This story practically scared me to death. To be mistaken for a robot and trapped? How unbearable! I hear that, in Japan, some people are even marrying these humanoids. Kind of pathetic, to say the least.

      Great story, Nell. Excellent pace. This sort of thing would make for great television, too.

    • AliciaC profile image

      Linda Crampton 13 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is an interesting and scary story with a great ending, Nell. I enjoyed reading it very much.

    • tebo profile image

      tebo 13 months ago from New Zealand

      Great story Nell Rose. Very intriguing. It does make you start to wonder what the future holds in this department. The robots in the videos are very life like that is for sure.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Wow! thanks Savvy! scared you to death? perfect! Haha! just what I was aiming for, pretty scary stuff eh? thanks so much, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thank you Alicia, glad you liked it, and thanks for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks tebo, yes each year they are getting more and more life like, scary stuff! thanks for reading, nell

    • emge profile image

      Madan 13 months ago from Abu Dhabi

      Lovely short story Neil. Enjoyed it

    • MizBejabbers profile image

      MizBejabbers 13 months ago

      That gave me claustrophobia. I still can't decide if they trapped a real human soul inside the robot or if it were really the AI. Great job.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks for reading emge, glad you liked it, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Miz, lol! ah thats the point! or perhaps it was both? one of these days someone is going to implant part of a human brain in a robot, this would be the result I think, lol! arghh! bad thought though isn't it? thanks for reading, nell

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Fuller 13 months ago from Southern Illinois

      This is an incredible tale that doesn't seem too far fetched! Remember Star Wars, the original? We thought it was far-out then, but today we think nothing about living in space. I loved your flash fiction. Way to go Nell!

    • billybuc profile image

      Bill Holland 13 months ago from Olympia, WA

      The girl in that first picture has mesmerizing eyes.....once I got past her picture I was able to read the story and wowzers, it was a dandy!!!! That's right, you got a WOWZERS for this one!!!!! :)

    • MartieCoetser profile image

      Martie Coetser 13 months ago from South Africa

      Oh, my goodness, this is how it must feel to be buried alive, waking up in that coffin 6ft underground - one of my frequent nightmares! I was probably buried alive in my previous life. Lol!

      Well, if they create robot housekeepers and chefs, I may very well buy one. But yes, the question is, how real can robots really be? What if they do develop thoughts and feelings?

      Scary!

    • clivewilliams profile image

      Clive Williams 13 months ago from Nibiru

      This sounded just like tales from the darkside! Nicely done. Good plot, good ending.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks Ruby, glad you liked it, I always like the weird and spooky, but this is a bit too close to home! lol!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Wow! Bill! thanks so much! lol! from you thats an awesome compliment! now for the next flash fiction! lol!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Martie, ouch! not a good thought is it? a scary thought, just think if they can use their minds what will they do?! thanks for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Aw thanks so much Clive, glad you liked it, I love this sort of stuff!

    • Blond Logic profile image

      Mary Wickison 13 months ago from Brazil

      Well that was spooky, now I probably will have nightmares! Thanks a bunch.

      I find robots rather unnerving to tell the truth. I don't even like watching computer generated graphics as I don't want to begin thinking they look like humans.

      Where the heck are we humans heading?

    • MsDora profile image

      Dora Isaac Weithers 13 months ago from The Caribbean

      Nell, I sure hope they know what they're doing. And I hope it doesn't happen the other way around where they mistake humans for robots. Good read!

    • Jodah profile image

      John Hansen 13 months ago from Queensland Australia

      A great short story..Nell..scored high on my "freakometer". Loved it. Those Japanese androids are amazingly real too.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      lol! sorry about that Blond Logic! yes they are pretty creepy aren't they? I think the Japanese ones are really creepy purely because they do the best creep out films, so it reminds me of them! lol!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks so much MsDora, you never know it may happen that one day someone will be mistaken for a robot, or the other way round! scary either way! thanks so much for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi John, thanks so much, I love my freaky stuff! lol! glad you liked it, nell

    • Shyron E Shenko profile image

      Shyron E Shenko 13 months ago from Texas

      Oh wow Nell, you outdid yourself on this one. What a great story line.

      Are you going to make it into a series? I can just see it how she tries to escape from the carnival.

      Blessings my friend

    • fpherj48 profile image

      Paula 13 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Whoa Nell!!! OK, help me out here. Is this a human who was put in the glass box & paralyzed to appear to be a robot? OR....a Robot who thought she was human? Are you trying to confuse an old lady Nell?

      I just want you to know it worked!

      Love your flash fiction!! Paula

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      lol! Thanks Shyron, you got a point there! you never know! thanks as always, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      HIya Paula, lol! no don't panic its a robot! phew! you always make me laugh! thanks as always, nell

    • fpherj48 profile image

      Paula 13 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      LOL....good Nell...that's my job!! :)

    • profile image

      suzettenaples 13 months ago

      Great story Nell! I never saw that ending coming!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      LOL! Paula!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks Suzette, that's what I hoped for! LOL! thanks for reading, nell

    • FlourishAnyway profile image

      FlourishAnyway 13 months ago from USA

      Great job on this creepy tale. I was given anesthesia one time that didn't take all the way so that I heard and felt what was going on (blunted but I felt it!) and this reminded me of that awful trapped feeling.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Ow! sorry to hear that Flourish! that must have been terrifying! thanks for liking my story and hope it didn't give you the creeps!

    • Vellur profile image

      Nithya Venkat 13 months ago from Dubai

      Great flash fiction, spellbound till the very end. My God what an experience for Sally and you are right the days are not far off when Robots will take over many of our tasks and maybe rule the world!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks Vellur, yes scary thought isn't it? glad you liked it, and thanks for reading, nell

    • lawrence01 profile image

      Lawrence Hebb 13 months ago from Hamilton, New Zealand

      Nell

      I enjoyed the story, kind of reminiscent of Asimov's 'Bicentennial Man" in some ways.

      Enjoyed it and can see the idea but still think there'll be a fundamental difference in the 'soul'

      Great story

      Lawrence

    • aviannovice profile image

      Deb Hirt 13 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Nothing is out of the realm of possibility any more. I just hope that they don't get to find out what the negative parts of humanity are like and they adopt them.

    • ChitrangadaSharan profile image

      Chitrangada Sharan 13 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Wonderful and absorbing story and you kept the interest till the end. And that explains why it is an excellent example of flash fiction.

      Thank you so much!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi Chitrangada, aw thanks so much! glad you liked it, thanks

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Good points Deb, just hope they are nice when they make them! thanks so much for reading, nell

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Hi lawrence, yes you are probably right, but it was a fun write! LOL! thanks as always, nell

    • Jackie Lynnley profile image

      Jackie Lynnley 13 months ago from The Beautiful South

      What a great little story nell! I really liked it with the shocking ending. I did not know what to expect but certainly not how it was so that is a great story teller! Surprise and shock...makes us want more of this!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 13 months ago from England

      Thanks Jackie, glad you liked it, and always great to see you!

    • bravewarrior profile image

      Shauna L Bowling 12 months ago from Central Florida

      Nell, your story is freaky. I think that was a real woman trapped in the box and not a robot at all. I'd panic, for sure!

      Why do we need human looking robots? What purpose do they serve? I'd be pretty creeped out if I came across one.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 12 months ago from England

      Thanks Shauna, its a robot but the makers gave it a bit of human brain to make it 'more real!' lol! which to be honest will probably what they will end up doing! thanks so much for reading, nell

    • Billrrrr profile image

      Bill Russo 11 months ago from Cape Cod

      Nell you nailed it. Soon human beings as we know them, will cease to exist. They will be flesh and binary.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 11 months ago from England

      Thanks Bill, yes it will get pretty scary won't it? thanks for reading, nell

    • cam8510 profile image

      Chris Mills 11 months ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      Great concept for a flash fiction story, Nell, and very well executed. The videos are amazing. I had no idea anyone was seriously pursuing this. By the way, the NYC Midnight Flash Fiction Challenge begins on July 22. Late registration ends on July 21. http://www.nycmidnight.com/Competitions/FFC/Challe... Just thought I'd pass the info along in case you are interested.

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 11 months ago from England

      Hi Cam, thanks for reading, yes its getting pretty scary isn't it? and thanks for the link too, I will go take a look, nell

    • johnmariow profile image

      John Gentile 10 months ago from Connecticut

      A scary gripping story. Very well written with a nice twist at the end reminiscent of the TV series 'The Twilight Zone.' Thanks for sharing!

    • Nell Rose profile image
      Author

      Nell Rose 10 months ago from England

      Hi john, thanks so much for reading, nell

    Click to Rate This Article