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Quicksand

Updated on November 18, 2014

Love is like a rubber band held with both ends by two

…...when one leaves it snaps….

it hurt

Like falling into a quicksand…

………………..it pulls you down slowly as your body compress


the crush

the burn

the tear...

the oozed of your only blood spills


…..and he watches….he watches…

your last teardrops…


….he never cared….

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    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very emotional. I love it that you describe love like a rubber band.

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      You've pretty much described certain experiences with love. Nice poem.