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Random Thought : My Whining : A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
I wish I can look this beautiful while waiting and feel bored
I wish I can look this beautiful while waiting and feel bored

Long day, boring day,

I'm sitting here, as usual, only with my own

Quiet, quiet, quiet.

Why I cannot able to heard a commotion outside my world?


It is still the same blue sky with theirs, here in my world

Clouds in the air but was unable to reduce the solar heat

Fortunately the wind was still blowing friendly

I sighed, tired; this boredom is exhausting


Why am I bored, you ask? Frankly I do not really know

My heart full of love, my brain filled with thoughts

My world is supposed to be very busy

But still, in a moment alone; the silence hugged me and reluctance to move


All my loved ones are far away there

I am tucked in the hubbub of the world

This residence hall of mine looks like a blur mainland inside the children's paintings

Green, red, always dirty and muddy; gave me a long gap and hum without meaning


Could not able to smile, could not able to laugh

Only crawling in a dark side of dream

Hope the skies finally open

So that I can hear the laughing of those angels


lonely, lonesome, alone

Air freezes

Idea in my mind ran void


Oh wow! a pile of work coming!

OK! I'll stop whining now!

Work! work! work!

At least these numbers will eliminate unsignificant air although only for temporarily


Eh? I just realized that Polar Bear did not come today

Ah, it must be it! This must be because he is not around! Hmm ...

He should know how it feels to live a day without his presence

Incredibly BORING!


(Ah, but it is not his fault. He is busy writing these days. I should be more patient. Sorry darling, to give you this whining. ;)) )

But somehow, in so many time, while waiting, I feel I start to look like this! :(
But somehow, in so many time, while waiting, I feel I start to look like this! :(

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, King Micky. Thank you, Sir. You always great company to be with. ^_*

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Dear Freya, you are so wonderful. I love you dear one!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Cassie. My random thoughts had created so many unfinish poems and stories. Hang on inside my throat and pulling me back from bloom into real writer. So annoying. LOL. Thank you for reading this, Cassie. Have a nice day! :)

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    Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

    Having random thoughts can be kind of unpredictable. A person can tend to lose their identity a bit in their own thoughts, and you seemed really pre-occupied her, Freya. But that's what makes it entertaining! Great hub! How many other random hubs could be as good as this? Not many - I'd say! Have a great day! Say hello to Polar Bear for us! LOL!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Eiddwen. I tried my best to be funny. I hope it work. Thank you, dear.

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    Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

    Brilliantly humorous hub.

    very clever use of words here and thank you so much for sharing.

    Take care.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I am already wait too long inside my boredom, Sir. I guess those spider feel pity on me and they started knit their cobwebs around me to companying me. Cute friends actually, if you like many hairy legs crawling everywhere on your body. LOL.

    Thank you for reading this product of my boredom, Saddlerider1.

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    saddlerider1 7 years ago

    I loved this rambling of thoughts and boredom, however the Hippo and dog was a highlight. I hope you don't have to add any cobwebs to that lady of waiting for her beau. She has waited far too long, hah...thanks for the read.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Micky. I'm glad you like the Hippo. He is great friend of mine. ^^ Happy cycling!

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Beautifully put Freya! That was a "hippo" laughs!Fuuunny!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Mentalist Acer. It just because I feel bored. I hope you like the Hippo! :D

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    Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    A delightfully eventful poem with an inventive twist on boredom...