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RAPTURE-Triolet Poem

Updated on July 9, 2017
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Charmaine is a poet and freelance writer who offers a Cartomancy service. Charmaine loves ideas and using a holistic approach to life.



feelings of rapture

are soaked within,

the snowy white mist

hugs the pine filled mountain of rapture,

speckled fireflies tryst

white streaks of angelic flow,

guiding me along the rapture

ricocheting from stepping stone to stepping stone, within,

glowing haze of pink blush,

dazzling the raspberry dashes

of cherry blossom trees,

new life is borne from the soft dream blush

that ecstatically beats my heart with ease,

bouquets of visions,

elevate and tranquilize the inner blush

of those past dashes

story told

in letters of gold,

etched in the cloudy reflections

shining from the boathouse lights bold,

my mind stares out with recollections,

the silent tap

of the sequestered waters, ahold

absorb spirit’s messages of gold


Thank you for stopping by and enjoying my poem.


© 2017 ThreeKeys


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      ThreeKeys 4 weeks ago from Australia

      Gracious of you, Gypsy Rose Lee. Thank you.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poetry, great imagery and nice photos.

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      ThreeKeys 5 weeks ago from Australia

      You are kind and gracious. Thankyou.

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      Louise Powles 5 weeks ago from Norfolk, England

      That's a lovely poem. The pictures are lovely too. Thankyou. I enjoy reading peoples poetry on Hubpages.

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      ThreeKeys 5 weeks ago from Australia

      With appreciation. Thank you whonu. All the best to you.

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      ThreeKeys 5 weeks ago from Australia

      You picked up on what I was trying to create, Mark. Cheers:)

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      whonunuwho 5 weeks ago from United States

      Your poem is full of beautiful color my friend. Well done and well received. Blessings. whonu

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      Mark Tulin 5 weeks ago from Santa Barbara, California

      First, you're welcome. Loved the colorful flow of this poem and the s-sound it made throughout. Sweet and somnolent ( in a good way).