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Reply to Amarantine

Updated on July 1, 2015


Overhead the trenches the warplanes romp

Motor bombs they scatter on soldiers at camp

Peeping through a creek in the trench that resides our platoon,

I spot heavily armoured tanks that might reach us soon

Without hesitating we tune into a defensive state

As I mobilize my infantry unit without haste

With our artillery loaded and ready to ravage;

we take our position ready; set for those savages!

''What makes grass grow!!?''...''BLOOD!!''

''What makes grass grow!!?''...''BLOOD!!''

''Then lets go out there and fight for our women and children!!''... SIR YES SIR!!....

My team is fired up and ready to go!!

Go hard!! or go to glory..

Bullet pellets over out M1 helmets; all dodged

By crawls; under camouflage; onward we forge

Finger on the trigger

we equally return the ''favour ''

Our military tanks drive ahead to invigorate the shield wall

as we shoot and scoot all at the same time standing tall

Through the dust storm caused be our tanks; in hundreds we sail into new positions to ambush

thanks to this confusion; we gain new positions just under the enemy's nose; at a nearby bush

''Dutch was not built in a day; we have to teach them that; with a severe lesson!!''

On sight from the sky over us, I spot many white doves

I glance at them severally; hmm; is this a good sign?''...

Abruptly, our Dutch war planes fly in after the doves. Its game over!!

Magically, we finally envelope the NAZI SS.. as we fight till victory

Decisive victory! Splendid Indeed..!!

....Whoa! a sigh of relief feels me up when we see the enemy give in...

..............................What a bloody day!!..............................


Am now sure I will be seeing her again

Through that dusty path; I shall return whole to her

How I miss wrapping my arms around your waist

Well, you folding your arms to a clinch will soon be a gone thing!

My magnificent, I just want to see you happy

because it makes me happier

I will soon be seeing that consuming smile of yours

every time of the day, especially when we go to the our nearby flower garden tours

So as you sip your cup of tea

just know that soon I will join you

My love; if loving you is wrong

then I don't want be right

Coz you are hot like a fire

pretty like a myrrh

my heart's desire

P.S.... look through the window and smile; coz I have missed that so much.... and ooh by the way I got me a new pipe .......''OMG!!''...

Raynold Grahams Omondi



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    • RaynoldGrahamsooo profile imageAUTHOR

      Raynold Grahams Omondi 

      3 years ago from Luton, UK, England.

      Cheers Mate! I appreciate it.! @lee Cloak

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      Lee Cloak 

      3 years ago

      Fantasticly creative, great to read, very well done, thanks for sharing, Lee

    • RaynoldGrahamsooo profile imageAUTHOR

      Raynold Grahams Omondi 

      3 years ago from Luton, UK, England.

      The photos are there to bring the reality in it ..but am sorry for them.. Thanks for reading!))

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      JR Krishna 

      3 years ago from India

      Very creative poems

      Photos are scary

    • RaynoldGrahamsooo profile imageAUTHOR

      Raynold Grahams Omondi 

      3 years ago from Luton, UK, England.

      Thanks bro for reading bro I appreciate!

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      frank nangame 

      3 years ago from western

      Creative and unique hubbler.

      I really enjoyed the poetry part.

      Thanks for sharing


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