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Raging Passion

Updated on March 6, 2013

Lover's Embrace

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Raging Passion

 

This is that day, when the gloves will come off

Feel me grab you passionately and give you a toss

Throwing you down gently on the pillows and bed

Look in my eyes and know what is in my head

 

Lay there; don’t move for you are mine tonight

You are seriously helpless but to be my, delight

Give me your sweet hand as I tie you to the post

Crossing you slowly with a kiss, I will not boast

 

Reaching the other side, to bind you in this fashion

Then hovering over you with such fiery passion

Staring into your eyes, helpless you will lay

As I move slowly, down your body and begin to play

 

Feel these kisses and feel the strength in this touch

For, I intend to pleasure you very, very much

Lay there, sigh and take it as long as you can

For tonight, my love, I am going to get, caveman

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      Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      Loved it wow, such passion. You have such a way with words. You inspire me always. I only know whoever she is, that you write for. That she feels blessed.

      Sweet wishes Rhonda.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Hi Rhonda...I'm doing something a little different with my poetry by turning them into videos for youtube...I'll have it posted here in just a few moments. Thank you for enjoying my poetry. Comments like yours drives me to write more and more.

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      Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      Wow that is a great idea. I would love to see that. Thanks

      Sweet wishes Rhonda.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Hi Rhonda...the video is posted...make sure you turn the sound down on your speakers before you play it...I'm not sure how loud it is but it should be low.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      BTW Rhonda, thank you for your support these past few weeks...you have been awesome.

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      Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      You are so very welcome. I will be here I am not going anywhere. This poem on u tube is totally a great idea.

      Sweet wishes Rhonda.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you Rhonda, if you are interested in making videos like this, let know and I'll write a hub about it...fact is...I think I shall. I'll post the information on the hub and shoot you a message so you can find it when it's done.

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      Shyla's Nana 6 years ago

      Wow.....this was HOTTTTT lol. Now to catch my breath hahaha. So how DID she get so lucky?????

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      s. mckinley 6 years ago

      WOW! Very descriptive. She is definately a lucky woman. Only hope I can find a man that passionate

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Shyla's Nana, I'm very grad you like this poem...breathe slowly lol...thanks for following my work.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Shyla's Nana, I'm very grad you like this poem...breathe slowly lol...thanks for following my work.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      S. McKinley, Thank you for reading my poetry. Passion, to me, is another part of romance. A romantic man is very passionate and very attentitive to woman he loves by fulfilling her desires and needs.

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      karma. 6 years ago

      Fabulous job!

      I actually like the font or typeface you used [ broadcast producer never leaves] The music seems wrong only in the rhythm. If it reads with that rhythm, than it's just me struggling with what or how I read vs execution??? ugh I try

      Bottom line, great idea and am stealing it as we speak

      xo

      It flows through me like this

      just a thought

      stand by

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      prey 6 years ago from places you should hope we never meet

      Karma, give it a rest you wouldn't know rhythm if you were skipping rope, nonetheless how does this sequence of rhythm beats feel with those beautiful words? I am just enjoying exploring creative possibilities - its actually perfect as is, but a bedtime song sleep well!

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dlmBCrBJokA

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thanks Karma...I will admit that the rhythm of the music was and the style of music wasn't my first chocie but as I sat there watching the video during playback, there was a sense of urgency within the rhythm so I kept it.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thanks Prey...I'm getting ready to spend the day working on something special for my 75th hub...definitely something more soothing in the music and the words.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      ...........Much much more fun to do

      Than read about it in a haiku

      Been there done that with someone

      Gotta do it with the right one

      You inspire many I'm sure.

      It's good you're married or taken

      For many would hunt you down

      I think or write you note of implore.

      Perhaps writing poems like this

      Can show raw passion

      And draw the right people to you

      Don't really know if this fashion

      Of writing about passion

      Would do. Did it help you?

      Or was it a thing you would always do?

      :)

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Writing poetry is the work of my hands

      Thank you Blondey and all of my fans

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      LChristiane 4 years ago from Florida

      I need some water. lol. That left me thirsty. Enjoyed this, thank you.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 4 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thanks LChristiane...I'm glad you enjoyed my romantic passionate side.

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