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Rain So Soothing By Sam Tumblin / PROMOSTKING

Updated on January 16, 2017

Rain So Soothing

Why does the rain sound so soothing when it falls from the sky

It makes my mind go at ease or relax enjoying the natural high

Enjoying the pitter patter of the rain drops as the heavens cries

Sun blocked from the clouds begging to be free but often tries

Why does the rain sound so soothing when it falls from the sky

My mind goes back to simplier times enjoying the natural high

Enjoying the pitter patter of the rain drops as the heavens cries

Sun blocked from the clouds begging to be free but often tries

Why does the rain sound so soothing when it falls from the sky

We all have different reasons take time to enjoy the natural high

Listen to the pitter patter of the rain drops as the heavens cries

Sun blocked from the clouds begging to be free but often tries

Why does the rain sound so soothing when it falls from the sky

I told you my mind is at ease or relax enjoying the natural high

Sam Tumblin

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    • Genna East profile image

      Genna East 15 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Unique and clever. :-)

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Soothing read, I must say and great image. Soothing read, I must say and great image. Yes, intentionally repeated for emphasis. :)

      Clever piece!

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      mabelhenry 2 years ago from Harrisburlg, Pennsylvania

      This poem demands us focus. The repetition is deliberate in order to grasp the point.

      "Why does the rain sound so soothing when it falls from the sky

      To even hear it there is a sensitivity to nature and beyond that scope.

      It makes my mind go at ease or relax enjoying the natural high

      Rain is soothing as it cleanses.

      Enjoying the pitter patter of the rain drops as the heavens cries

      Can we hear the sounds of sorrow in the rain?

      Sun blocked from the clouds begging to be free but often tries

      Milky clouds taking over the skies even when the sun is the choral verse of the day.

      Your poem is beautiful, inquisitive, and yet instructional to look up!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      I agrre with Shanmarie. Different but effective.

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      shanmarie 2 years ago

      Interesting repetition here. Much like the pitter patter of soothing rain falling from the sky.

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