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Rain of Dreams

Updated on July 27, 2013

I felt the rain

inside...

warm.. soft

Releasing my pain..

cold... hard


The two sides of love

freedom of the heart ..

expression.. flight


Hidden dreams of sadness

loneliness..tears that flow..


Just like the Rain of Love

Drops of warm, soft, release

pelting... cold , hard, sadness


Releasing my heart to fly

expressing... the lonely, sad,

depths of my soul

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Nikki..

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      Nikki Wicked 4 years ago from Louisiana

      Let the rain and tears flow so eventually the sun will shine and you will be all smiles.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Rochelle .

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Nice work Michael. Voted up and awesome :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you blossom .. glad you have visited my hub.. it is appreciated..

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Great use of words and so good. Voted it up.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thanks Wayne ..

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautiful work Michael. Voting up.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddi .. you are to kind .. and one of a kind.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So touching/gripping; great write Michael and here's wishing you a great day.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you .. all is well.. you look out for me so often.. bless you for keeping me in your thoughts.. hope all is well with you ..keeping you and your sis in my prayers always.

      Michael

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      This is exquisite Michael. I love the polar opposites you write about in regards to love. You are so talented with the pen and matters of the heart. Hope all is well. Have a great week my friend.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Kim .. enjoy your day ..!

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Love the title and the sentiment. Nicely done sir!

      Best,

      Kim

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh stop... lol! No, I just get a lot of notifications from HP, that's all. I'm going looking, otay? :D

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Cat.. you must get a lot of e mails .. mine is at the bottom..LOL

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Michael,

      The two sides of love, much like the two sides of rain. It's amazing how rain can be the sweetest thing or just a reminder of our pain. Love, cuts deep and yet, can heal. Very much liked this one!

      Up and others ~ Sharing too!

      Cat

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      Clara Kish 4 years ago from Mt. Perry. Ohio

      Thanks,Michael, I was just curious, I had written poems for years and I don't know how good they were , they most not have been very good because I asked God to touch my pen ,It was only when I told Him I would write for him alone that's when He touched my pen.The last part of it is the last of the poem that I had written I have never been sorry. I never thought anyone would ever call me a great poet , but thank you .Clara

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Hello Clara .. thank you for the visit.. Clara you are not supposed to ask questions like that .. LOL

      Well Miss Clara.. It seems that when the lord gives me my poems ..in the form of sayings or comments that ring a bell in my head .. I have only written poetry for about a year now so I am finding and perfecting my style .. You are a great poet ..Miss Clara..

      Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. my friend and muse ..thank you, Faith

      just reading your words has the power to inspire idea's, that come back to me later as poems.

      Glad to see you hear Faith ..!

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      Clara Kish 4 years ago from Mt. Perry. Ohio

      Hello Michael , yes ,you do have a way with words, don't you ever feel that God has touched your pen for a reason ? Clara

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, Michael, you certainly have a way with words! A true poet to the core.

      Hugs,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie .. thank you for the comment ..

      appreciate the visit ..

      Would you say I have a way with words.?

      Michael

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      you are welcome :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you ..James ..

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      It is sometimes hard to comment on someone elses poetry and feelings but you have a style that I really like regardless of what you are writing about.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem had it all. . You are a very good poet. I have enjoyed reading your work.

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      ECLECTIC PLETHORA 4 years ago from LOST IN TIME

      YW :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks ZZz..

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      ECLECTIC PLETHORA 4 years ago from LOST IN TIME

      Michael ... soulful and sultry. Thank you

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