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Magic of the Rainbow ~haiku~

Updated on July 05, 2013

A haiku about the magic of the rainbow


A little sprinkle

Rain and sunshine in the sky

Multicolored paint


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.


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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      oh my....what a haiku......so colorfully creative. superb work Spy

      up voting and sharing too

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      A brilliant haiku, loved the images. Voting up and beautiful.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Deergha, Jo, thanks so much for reading!

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Perfect!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks snow.

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      Pamela Oglesby 4 years ago from United States

      Love it. The rainbow is beautiful also.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Pamela, thank you dear friend!

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Beautiful Haiku. I am just learning to understand Haiku . What technique is this unknown spy?

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      So lovely!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Lovely, speaking of the variety we have in this world! Great, Spy!

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. To say so much with a few words makes a awesome Haiku !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      One of my favorite things - a rainbow. Your haiku represents it well.

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      Suzette Walker suzettetaos 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      How beautiful! And I love the photo and illustration. You have a way with words!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now these few words say it all...

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. There's nothing more beautiful than seeing the reflection of a rainbow after it rains. Voted up!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      You really know how to write Haiku poems.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Awesome, Spy! I love rainbows - they're like seeing God smile. You depicted the rainbow perfectly!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      You are getting very good at these Haikus! This was awesome!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      You used the Haiku to describe the rainbow perfectly. Thank you. Jamie

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy.....WOW..just WOW....

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      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      In 3 short lines you've set my mind free. This haiku had me in daydream land for a second. Good one, Spy!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      The words and the imagery together are just perfect. So very beautiful and simple. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Ignugent.. it's 5-7-5. and i really dont know the technique..im also learning how to write it more effectivley. You can visit Olde Cashmere's hub about writing a haiku.. :)

      @Billy, Michelle, Kashmir, Beckie, Suzette, Deb, Lovedoctor,Joyce, J(osh), Jamie, KJF, Ryem, Faith,

      I am so happy to read all your messages for my work. I'm still learnign to use words and line that will perfectly fit into a picture. Kepp your fingers crossed! Thank you much!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      How clever you are! Loved it..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Love rainbows. This was colorfully delightful.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you guys!

      @Ruby

      @Gypsy

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      Christy Birmingham 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Awesome Haiku - so much contained in the few words!

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      Vicki L Hodges 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      I love the haiku AND the photos!

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Interesting... and recognized as such.. Natural temporary paint.

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      Angelo52 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautifully expressed. A wonderful haiku meshed well with the illustrations.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hELLO Christy, Victoria, CM, Angelo..

      Thank you all for stopping by.

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Love your beautiful haiku and the photo.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hello rosemay, thank you for your message.

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      After the rain, a smile at the thought of you...

      Voted UP and very Beautiful!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks my sweet dear Maria!

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Short and sweet, Unknown. :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Aubrey, that's sweet, thanks my friend!

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      Atiba Sheikh 4 years ago from India

      it is a very sublime haiku.describing a thing of beauty in few words but elegantly......great work!!!!!!!!!!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      that was very nice comment Atiba! glad you liked it.

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