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The clouds of the Universe

Updated on January 25, 2012
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It's time to make this happen...no better time than now...pushing and climbing over the standard,
The times are changing...but of course there are...timeless exceptions....just temples and redirections,
Anytime they make valiant descents...demoralized remembrances of cabin notions,
Regardless of the ruse...it's the tracks that count...path be followed unto completion and designation.

The bar is rising ever more slightly...I push and push...the stick is to long but it budges with intelligent redetermination,
Legislation of the crowds move the sway like mountains in the gravities of the planet,
Swish like the seas of the planet...like music to my ears as I begin my ascent,
The mountains don't seem to deny me...new age rising from the destructive suffocation.

The grasshoppers and praying mantises bowing in response to the ground level clouds,
All hovering...floating like ghosts among the warmest...bright daylight concentrating,
Don't you hear it...the clicking of the bar up and up...letting the world know it's ok to pass under,
The results of future generations fumbling for the right answers...scientific method hypothesizing.

Touch the clouds of the universe as we walk...you...me...and all of them that try...succeeding,
Let the energies of the flows of life carry an appreciation for the deliveries we have made,
Creative pursuits of endless possibilities...the rights of the wrongs make the wrongs into a right,
Throw in the towel...the bar is raised...it's time to make our path be known...walk and be enlightened.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Excellent motivational poem! I wish every American would read and act on this hub. Well done.

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      BakerRambles 5 years ago from Baltimore, MD

      I'm glad you thought highly of it. I tried to keep alot of various issues in perspective.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      "the rights of the wrongs make the wrongs into a right"

      This line hits me!

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      BakerRambles 5 years ago from Baltimore, MD

      I added it for some extra pull in the equation. Thanks for understanding the complexity of it.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      nice Mark. your usage of words always interests me greatly.

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      BakerRambles 5 years ago from Baltimore, MD

      Thank you pdx, I always appreciate the compliments from you. I'm glad the words jumped out with images.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      you're welcome, Mark. I'm pleased to have the privilege to read your work.

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      Kathleen Kerswig 5 years ago

      Beautiful - voted up! Thank you for sharing this. Well done.

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      BakerRambles 5 years ago from Baltimore, MD

      Thank you Kathleen, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will be sure to check out yours as well.

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