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Rambling thoughts (short poems)

Updated on April 23, 2013

Thought 1:

So if you would like to leave me
I would ask you too kindly to
shut up your mouth
and clear out .

Thought 2:

I ain’t got no veranda
ain’t got no fancy car, ain’t got no damn
thing in my pockets.
But I’m alright, though, ‘cause my friends
are there for me whenever I am down' .


.Thought 3:

Having never experienced an earthquake
I try to stir one
holding my pen between my fingers
and write your name as a scandal on the national newspapers .

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Awesome poems.. lol..I love how you told her.. lol..

      love your poetry my friend

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Wow, so much in so few words. I love your short, clever poems. Voted up, interesting, awesome! Thanks for sharing, Debbie!

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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      very nice... the last is my absolute favortite... i am a huge fan of short poetry. maybe it is my short attention span!... i had no trouble paying attention to your words. :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Deborah Brooks.Thanks Debbie for the comment.I am glad you like it.Now,I can say I am done with those hubs.Now,I am free,I will write what you asked me a few days ago.I need just a start lol

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Victoria Lynn.Thank so much for taking time out and read some of my hallucinations lol

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Ok james.. lol.. you are welcome victoria...

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @DanaTeresa.Thanks for stopping by and commented.Short poems are much of fun.I really dont know how I got involved in this business lol It wasnt not my style when I started to write poetry lol

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Debbie.I am thinking of something ..You can say I have a plot lol

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Ok. Lol..no rush

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Lol I hear and obey ! lol

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      Shannon 4 years ago from Texas

      So much for rambling... LOL...These are great!

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      Sherri Tuck 4 years ago from Virginia

      Truly great observations on the honesty of human thought... I love them (especially the third) !

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @shanmarie.Thanks for the visit and comment.I am glad you like them:)Have a nice day!

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Very nice James and well written. :) voted up.

      I. White

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Isaac White.Thanks my friend for stoinpping by and commented.

      Have a nice day there!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sometimes the beast words come from the heart and mind together as one .. keep it up James

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ cleaner3.Thanks so much my friend.You re visits and inputs always are appreciated.

      Have a wonderful weekend

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      What a creative poem. Again, funny and yet poignant. I like your style. Fresh and independent.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ suzettenaples.Thanks so much for the compliment:)I am glad you liked it.

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      :) I am actually running out of words of praise for your poetry, but always know I enjoyed them.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Dianne,

      Thanks so much for being great commenter and converser.I really enjoyed talking to you.

      Have a wonderful time there!

      Sweet dreams!

      James

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      Thanks.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Have a good night ! :)just watch out the road when you drive :d

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      :D always do.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Good girl lol

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