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The raw deal by motive force

Updated on March 30, 2013


Brains like Einstein
Mind so sharp like a porcupine
Evolved from the primitive
Exceeding that of relative
Remoteness of a gadget
Electromotive like a magnet
storming display on the worlds stage
worded aggravation spun this thought maze
leaping through portals for a billion days
A subterranean sensational phase


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Trains on Grind time
Spine sparks its inferno sting

like acidic turpentine
Revolved from that Fiery motive
Bleeding by perspective so explosive
Swing like a Javelin
At mock speed traveling
centipede mind-frame
Playing those arcade time games
as the earth skips its heart beat
You face success being burnt by your own heat




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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @Gypsy Rose Lee, thanks for the cool comment and for sharing, so glad you like my poem here, I had fun with it.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @always exploring, than you Ruby, it does feel good to release these poems every now and then, because holding back such thoughts in my head never does me any good, you know. It sure was fun to write it :)

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      @Kasman, Thanks bro yeah I use to rap a great deal and been doing it for about 18+ years now, so yeah my poetry sometimes surfaces upon that genre every once in a while.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Fantastic and great trip. Love the video. Passing this on.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You've got that groovy sound in your poetry, a natural. Loved it Cloud..Thank you..

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      Kas 4 years ago from Bartlett, Tennessee

      I felt like I heard a song in the background just listening to it. I could almost hear the beats to it and the rhythm. Have you thought about just straight up songwriting? Voting up Mike.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Thanks @MrsBrownsParlour, I had fun with this one a few days back, and finally unleashed it, glad you liked it.

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      Lurana Brown 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Strong, active imagery and really cool video---great job, full of character!