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Raymond Monroe Is My Him

Updated on March 19, 2012


I ran and chased a pavement, concrete that was never mine


On a search to find her Adam, a mister one of a kind


Sanguine fluid that ran blue inside, red upon thy skin


Call me Misses Cellophane in reverse no ray of light within



On my knees I crawled through life falling into the open cracks


Hoping one day to discover the book of life the stories hidden facts


Inhaling the breathe of life laced with scarlet despair


Let I play a game of roulette or possibly a truth or dare



Trigger pressed chamber empty the game that dared now failed


A soul in search of self-reliance and a possible love to sail


A thousand miles I walked across to ask the man above


I come to thee on my knees asking for your almighty love



In you I trust and take to hold me by my hand


My child he replied I’ve carried you across the lava and quick sand


Your time has come and your story finished


Open your eyes and move on freely, woes will soon diminish



Off I went and roamed the grounds and found my missing piece


The piece I was set forth to have that will never be released


A smile I have worn since that very special day


The day my “Him” my Raymond Monroe placed a love to stay.


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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      yeah up and awesome :)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      I love your poem I agree with frank awesome.. I love the way you write ...I love this line..

      The day my “Him” my Raymond Monroe placed a love to stay.

      just awesome

      voted up

      debbie

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Frank, thank you kindly for sticking with my sporadic writing lol

      Deborah, Thank you very kindly I really appreciate it and your comment.

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good job, Bella, and good for you!

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      It's full of new hope of new love...very nice. Take care :-)

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Sub, Thank you yes YAY ME!!!

      Katrine, Our story on how we hooked up is quite unique and special. Thank you!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Bella,

      you two make a good looking couple, he has hit the jackpot to have found someone as special as YOU.!!!

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Cleaner, I have also won something special he is truly my piece to my puzzle :)

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      penlady 5 years ago from Sacramento, CA

      Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Jaggedfrost 5 years ago

      You may dislike me for this but I am surprised that I like this. I am glad you are at peace now. That is one tough row to hoe as it were.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem for your 'him' hopefully you can stay in peace, Joyce. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Woopie Bella!! Happy for you...

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow totally brillliant. I have missed your wonderful poetry Bella.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Penlady,Thank you very much :)

      Jagged, a lot are used to my dark and painful writing I as well miss it very much but it is a side of me that no longer exists because it was casted out with happiness and light but I still appreciate your comment and honesty.

      Writer, Thank you very much I appreciate your comment and warmth in my new found love.

      Always, WooHoo is correct :)))))

      Ace, Thanks Aphrodite lol Writing is not as easy as it was it takes a lot for me to write unfortunately I do really miss it tho. :)))

      smiles :))

      bella

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love the vivid imagery in your poem Bella...simply beautiful...

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Raci, thank you I tried giving that intense image to the wondering mind :)))

      bella

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      "Your time has come and your story finished

      Open your eyes and move on freely, woes will soon diminish"

      Wonderful message.

      Voted up and away!

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      Mohan Kumar 4 years ago from UK

      The poetry of pure passion . A heartfelt rhyme, awesome the way you have captured your hearts voice. Beautiful couple, beautiful poetry. All the best- voted up!

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      Erica Sanchez 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Docmo your the sweetest you truly are :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Well Erica - you could definitely teach a master class in writing for all of your adoring fans and I was intrigued by the confessional nature of the title.

      I am sitting here listening to an awesome Jerry Garcia/Merle Saunders cd loud of course and sending you sincere warm wishes for your continued good health, happiness and prosperity and love of course from lake erie time ontario canada (and baby it's cold outside -lol) at 10:20pm

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      I like how your poem ended. : ) Good visual placement through words in sentimental and mysterious ways. A true warrior of love and that touch of bitter-sweet resolve.

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