ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Razors And Rollercoasters

Updated on May 2, 2010
Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue
Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue

Razors and Rollercoasters

My heart has fallen apart

And crumbled away

I knew this would happen on some fucked up day.

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve thrown my heart away.

Still not satisfied You torment to this day.

Every chance you get you take my heart away

And begin stomping it so far away

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away

No thoughts of any of my worries or concerns

You still continue in silence

And I still convey Immature reasons

And for you no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away.

Even in all my pain

You still have no cares

You still continue to rip the heart from my chest

And stomp it away even for the many they.

Immature reason and no words to say look what you’ve

Done you’ve thrown my heart so very far away.

 

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      My cue to take a bow.

    • SummerSteward profile image

      SummerSteward 

      8 years ago from Duluth MN

      In your mirrored views

      Awfullness I have found not

      Inspiration; beathless lips upon my cheek

      A poet by your words

      have found me fanning

      It is I who gives thanks

      In generousity found.

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Such A Well Thought Out Comment

      Ahw Constructive Criticism

      Some Thing I Can Work With.

      I Must Give High Thanks

      For Your Words.

      Most Glad To Have You As A Fan.

    • SummerSteward profile image

      SummerSteward 

      8 years ago from Duluth MN

      Like alternate said, I like the cycle here. The cycle of thought, in my opinion is sometimes so important at conveying for the audience what is the focal point. It brought me through the piece with emotion... betrayal, anger and amazed audacity and the caulousness of peoples disregard. You have a real fan in me.

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad To See Your Curiosity @ Truster

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      So Glad To

      Hear BlackReign

    • blackreign2012 profile image

      blackreign2012 

      8 years ago

      A rate up for sure loved it ~!hugs~

    • profile image

      kimberlyslyrics 

      8 years ago

      You rock

      xo

      Kimberly

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Lol..Nice!

    • alternate poet profile image

      alternate poet 

      8 years ago

      You took it badly then ? only joking, very expressive and I like the psychotic feeling from staying with the end rhyme so long, like picking at a sore! cool.

    • profile image

      Sapphire Fisher 

      8 years ago

      I'm glad you can show true emotion in your poems Darlin!

    • Awful Poet profile imageAUTHOR

      Awful Poet 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You For Noticing!

      Your So Kind.

      Means So Much To Me.

      This Is A little Older

      If Anyone Was Curious.

      Nether The Less.

    • profile image

      getmyback 

      8 years ago

      CONGRATS ON 10 HUBS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Your so great.

      um, whoever has done this to your heart is a fool and may your heart be replaced with new experiences that bring you the sense of purpose that already lives within you

      Dave, keep going, lots of us really are proud of you

      billY

    working

    This website uses cookies

    As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

    For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

    Show Details
    Necessary
    HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
    LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
    Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
    AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
    Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
    CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
    Features
    Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
    Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
    Marketing
    Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
    Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
    Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
    Statistics
    Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
    ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)