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Razors And Rollercoasters

Updated on May 2, 2010
Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue
Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue

Razors and Rollercoasters

My heart has fallen apart

And crumbled away

I knew this would happen on some fucked up day.

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve thrown my heart away.

Still not satisfied You torment to this day.

Every chance you get you take my heart away

And begin stomping it so far away

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away

No thoughts of any of my worries or concerns

You still continue in silence

And I still convey Immature reasons

And for you no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away.

Even in all my pain

You still have no cares

You still continue to rip the heart from my chest

And stomp it away even for the many they.

Immature reason and no words to say look what you’ve

Done you’ve thrown my heart so very far away.

 

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      My cue to take a bow.

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      In your mirrored views

      Awfullness I have found not

      Inspiration; beathless lips upon my cheek

      A poet by your words

      have found me fanning

      It is I who gives thanks

      In generousity found.

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Such A Well Thought Out Comment

      Ahw Constructive Criticism

      Some Thing I Can Work With.

      I Must Give High Thanks

      For Your Words.

      Most Glad To Have You As A Fan.

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      Like alternate said, I like the cycle here. The cycle of thought, in my opinion is sometimes so important at conveying for the audience what is the focal point. It brought me through the piece with emotion... betrayal, anger and amazed audacity and the caulousness of peoples disregard. You have a real fan in me.

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad To See Your Curiosity @ Truster

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      So Glad To

      Hear BlackReign

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      blackreign2012 7 years ago

      A rate up for sure loved it ~!hugs~

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      You rock

      xo

      Kimberly

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Lol..Nice!

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      alternate poet 7 years ago

      You took it badly then ? only joking, very expressive and I like the psychotic feeling from staying with the end rhyme so long, like picking at a sore! cool.

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      Sapphire Fisher 7 years ago

      I'm glad you can show true emotion in your poems Darlin!

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You For Noticing!

      Your So Kind.

      Means So Much To Me.

      This Is A little Older

      If Anyone Was Curious.

      Nether The Less.

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      getmyback 7 years ago

      CONGRATS ON 10 HUBS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Your so great.

      um, whoever has done this to your heart is a fool and may your heart be replaced with new experiences that bring you the sense of purpose that already lives within you

      Dave, keep going, lots of us really are proud of you

      billY