ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Reaching to you

Updated on August 29, 2016

Reaching out to you

The whispers in my head grow into a scream

Walking broken ground nothing is as it seems

Where to go when left the shadow of a former time

All the pitfalls coming; just another thing to climb

Offering the best of me; Still half of what we need

The inner battle tangles; as emotions bleed

Pressed into the corner as time invades my will

As the fight that’s in me goes limp and lays still

Cause I just forget what its like to be me

A set of eyes with a list to tie all the broken dreams

Cause when you can’t give what you can’t become you slowly start to see

Yourself- Reflection, your own worst enemy

So I look to the ground as my heart begins to pound

And I feel a bit of life just let itself go

Yet I’m still here reaching out to you

Just waiting in a silence for tomorrow to show.

Should I rhyme less or keep it in the style it is?

See results

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • janshares profile image

      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Beautifully written, sadness and desperation felt. Stay true to your developing style as you try different things. Voted up.

    • SMonaghan119 profile image
      Author

      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      This is one of my most heartfelt poems on account that the target of the poem was myself. Thank you for your encouraging words.

    • janshares profile image

      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Wow, that makes it even more powerful. I just read it again. See you again soon.

    Click to Rate This Article