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Real Poetic Form

Updated on October 24, 2013
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Real Poetic Form

When I write within my soul,

Is when I am fully gold.


When I rush, I snare.

An uncontemplated lair.


When I flush and go,

I'm uneasy and hold no form.


But with the soul of the heart

Is where I bring out my true art.

© 2013 PoeticPhilosophy

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Nooooooooooo problem.

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      Xiaosu Guo 3 years ago

      Thanks for super poetry! It is very meaningfull to my life.

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thanks Tuatha. Yeah, I found myself lost in the excitement of writing poetry and failed to realize I didn't put my meaning into it. Although it was still my knowledge and everything in my poetry... I didn't think about it whole-heartedly to make it perfect haha.

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      Kari Shinal 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

      Indeed, the soul is the core when we write. Rushed brings only words, the soul brings the meaning along for the ride. Thanks Poetic!

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thanks writinglover :).

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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      Thanks a lot James, and you 2 :).

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Awesome work, Poetic!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Excellent job here ,my friend!Good writing is always the one that comes from the heart and takes time to see the light!

      Have a beautiful weekend!