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Reasoned Fate

Updated on October 04, 2011

I want I want oh yes I want

In my eyes you cloud n taunt

With your lips you speak so sweet

With your eyes you project such heat

How can I reject what you want to show?

Without allowing anything to grow

To put myself out on the line

Without knowing if anything will define

A chance I am not sure if I want to take

I place my feet down and begin to brake

The words you speak make me fold

When I am close you tightly hold

When I place my lips onto yours

I shiver and shake from my core

I want to break loose so I won’t feel

Something that could possibly never be real

Second guessing the time we spend

Never wanting this feeling to end

In circles we go like a merry-go-round

Hoping we create that melodic sound

I pick up and place my running shoes

To run as fast as possible from your loving woos

I can’t help but to just stay here and wait

Hoping you are that of my reasoned fate


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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poem although a little sad. Love the red tree. up/beautiful

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      Writer it is but idk why I continue to stay there is just this weird connection and vibe and yearning will it fade do you think??



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      Kristen Burns-Darling 5 years ago from Orange County, California

      You've painted such a vivid view of the uncertain tug and pull of love or lust? Love or infatuation? Only time will tell the ending to the story... up, awesome, beautiful..

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      tnderhrt23 5 years ago

      You have such a way of capturing and expressing emotion, Ms bella! And its always so intense. Fire in the blood, Girl...that's how I characterize you. I so admire that. A powerful write.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Hoping that this is the INE this time. I hope so for you

      Lovely poem

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      I pick up and place my running shoes

      To run as fast as possible from your loving woos

      the most loving and beautyfull line


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      jfay2011 5 years ago

      I really like this. I like the usage of merry go round. Really sad too. I too like the picture of the tree.

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      Maja Dezulovic 5 years ago from Johannesburg, South Africa

      This was fantastic and very well put. I've gone through these feelings myself recently and you've hit the mark in your description. I guess it is only time and endurance that proves if it is the "real thing" or not. Thanks and well done.

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      I really love your poem, profound.....

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      We never know ' If these boots were made for walking ' Time will tell. Best wishes.. Cheers

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Lovely poem It touched me in a unique way, you have compassion poring out onto the screen with every rhyming word, nice style of poetry.

      voted up.

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