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Red Lace? (limerick)

Updated on January 27, 2013

Her eyes bloomed the promise of morn

Her lips were where wishes were born

Her skin heaven’s grace

Where dreams gently race

Her beard with red lace was adorn


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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Good imagery, nice work. voted up awesome & beautiful.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Vivid image.... Beautiful words! Great job, MH..... Voting up and awesome!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So that's why you showed her from the back...(grin)

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Didn't expect that. Great one.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Ummmm, which beard???? ha ha!

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      She was a true beauty from head to toe,

      One glance told you all you needed to know. :)

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      Salini 4 years ago from India

      Nice work...:) and nice picture...

      have a great day...:)

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Ouch!!

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Funny limerick, with a twist ending too.

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      love your pen here... and how you say so much, with so little... a trait of a great writer

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      oooops... Jamie

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      Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Very nice! Flowed really well and made me smile, too!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Her beard? lol so funny.. red lace

      you are the poet of originality

      blessings

      Debbie

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      O, dear. Not quite what we would expect..Thanks for the smiles this evening, Mh...

      Sending you more Angels this evening. :) ps

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Great poem with a twist !!!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Suppose that was the bearded lady from the circus. lol

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Well,I didn't see that one coming:)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      How do you keep coming up with these!!!! LOL!

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