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Redemption of death – a poem

Updated on July 22, 2013
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Far-away emptiness is creating few noises

In the forgotten boulevard

Of shaded layers,

Death is throwing a little ripple for praises

In the cottoned harbour

Of trailed prayers.

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Another song of nostalgic frills

Taking a dip in the holy river

For the death of soul,

A marooned story in a lone page

Wish for the ultimate peace

Of the departed role.

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A rise and some more sparkles

Can’t be always finer delights

Moon is such a forlorn yarn,

The old cacophony of tarnish

And sepia pages are yarning

For the warmth of love tarn.

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More over then a past

Few strands of strength

The tunes of death for time to end,

However a myth in crust

Cuddling the icy warmth

To spring of demise to zest till trend.

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Worshipping a saga

Existence to deny

Toward a mounting temptation,

Furthering an effort

Rumbling a few silence

Promise to counting redemption.

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Another sun in another night,

It is a page almost in sight.

For a death was living a hell

To prelude another cremation.


The sun and a Moon take a dip

For the death in the holy river

Salvation rise high….

In redemption to us….

To me….

You are my death…

Welcome to where time never ends!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      My dear Leslie, Thank you dear. I am so much honored. Actually I just put down my fleeting thoughts and there is a poem may be. Even do not know whether it deserves to be named as a poem so far. But whatever, your comments, visits , votes and shares are always much appreciated. I am not thinking even about a book so far. Thanks again

      Take care

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @tillsontitan.....for your visit, votes and view here. Its always very precious for me.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @web923......for reading this poem and taking your time to comment here. Its much appreciated.

      Take care

      deergha

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      Bill Blackburn 4 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

      That was beautiful!"Where time never ends" was so perfect!

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      "Where time never ends"...that sums it up pretty well. Where we will find eternity and peace.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Deergha, one day many years from now - students will be sitting in poetry classes - dissecting YOUR incredible poetry!

      There are some amazing poets on the hub and i often wonder; why here?

      I hope you have books of poetry available to the general public somewhere -because if you don't - it's a collective shame!

      up and sharing, my friend

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear Gypsy for stopping by here. Your vies are always a much inspiration for me in my voyage to write always. It means a lot really.

      Thanks again

      Take care

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Wonderfully and poetically creative. Belief in the Lord is our salvation. Love the last line Deergha - Welcome to where time never ends. Passing this on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you for dropping by here @ Mhatter.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this thought provoking poem.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks and its great to see you here after some time dear Michele. Its nice to know that you have liked my work. Take care

      deergha

      ..............................................................................................................Dear BlossomSB,,,,,,many thanks for your continual support and inspiration here. Your view is much appreciated always.

      Thanks again....

      take care

      deergha

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      dear midget....many thanks for your perspective. Its indeed nice to have your comment, visit and shares here. Take care my friend....

      deergha

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Deergha, death indeed brings peace. Thanks for sharing this, full of wonderful metaphor and imagery. Passing it on.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I like to think that we do not really die, just a final sleep and pass over to a wonderful, eternal life.

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      This is a wonderful hub. Salvation is one of God's gifts to us. And so is Paradise.

      Voted up!