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Remember Where We Made Love (limerick)

Updated on July 4, 2015

Remember the night of affair

That place where our love we did bare

Where love lit the sky

As passions did fly

I think I left my car keys there


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Martin car you are great..



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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Was it a long walk?

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      How did you get home? lol

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Did you call a cab? Funny..

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      Life and Luxury 4 years ago from South Beach, FL


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That was great!!

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Understadable... you were otherwise occupied. Lol

      Thanks for the chuckle

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      Angelo52 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Funny. Good use of the limerick style - gave me a chuckle or two.

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      How utterly romantic and super sensitive! You are the best! Voted up, funny and awesome!

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      So, that could be embarrassing..going to retrieve them, depending on where they were left..o my..I laughed out loud.

      Good morning and happy day 10 0f our new year....Sending you, Angels, my friend....:) ps

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Almost thought you were skipping a funny! Great one.

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      You will have to find those if you want to get her going again...the car that is! LOL:-))

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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      Car, truck, cemetery.... some of the best love (if you wanna call it that) i ever made was in cheap motels... place doesn't matter, it's how you use it! LOL! ;)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      But was it worth it? LOL

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Must have been good!

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      Hurry now, and your steps retrace

      Back to Motel Six - that was the place.