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Remembering When (tanka)

Updated on June 19, 2013

Remembering when

Lovers in each others’ arms

Under moonlit stars

Join in a timeless refrain

Lost in remembering when


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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      sigh..melancholy moment, M...

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      "Join in a timeless refrain" Beautiful!

      Voted up and sharing

      Take care :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Simply and romantically beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Awesome and beautiful...

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Superbly done, my talented conspirator!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh I remember when.. with tears and love and wishing and wanting and thank you for a wonderful poem. and I agree with Colin the Hub would be BORING without you



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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      When:)Is that all?or are you playing tricks on our minds? lol Good job,and sorry,I am slow on the uptakes hahahaha lol

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      did I spell that correctly? B - O - R - I - N - G -

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...yes I remember the time when ....well, before you showed up Sir Martin and hub life was boring .....

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Circle of Life! Great tanka, MH! Enjoyed it.... All the best to you, dear friend! Voting up and ++

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Well job done. voted up ++++++ shares.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 5 years ago from Washington, DC

      Remembering when allows us to hold on to that loving feeling.

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      Gustave Kilthau 5 years ago from USA

      Good stuff, Martin (Mhatter99)

      Gus :-)))