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Remnants Of Sorrow

Updated on June 16, 2011

Tears, sadness, and a hope for love

Not giving the chance for anything above

Just a broken heart and an empty cavity

Held by earths terrestrials gravity


Walking the grounds with a crown of sorrow

Not knowing what type of remnant will come tomorrow

Will anything change, will it change at all

In prayer on my knees will we fall?


Is anything every good in any one’s eyes?

Hallow drops that fall when one cries

Is yesterday just another day that brings in today

That presents the next tomorrow’s grey


White, grey, or black clouds that linger

Possible leaving us to be a sad song singer

I suppose we can all just walk away

Leaving a body unknown with an aka


We all cry wars that sound in love and hate

Will it be in love that we call our fate?

But we all have much to do and we must carry on

In grieve we walk until we find ourselves gone

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Epi, Thanks a bunch it means a great deal to me! I think Mike Ness is a good looking man all his tattoos I adore. I have heard a few of their songs why you ask???

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....great title - but it's the words which follow that truly astound me in their poetic beauty - you are a force to be reckoned with - and such a force of literary nature at that - by the way just curious - and I have a epi-hunch here - are you familiar with one of my most favorite bands of all time - the mighty Social Distortion - from Southern California - featuring a pretty mean poet himself - Mr. Mike Ness.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Tnder, Ahhhh yes this piece I love as well good to have you back I missed ya lots hugs and more hugs!!!

      bella

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      bella, I related to this one...a powerful poignant piece here. nice job!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      I know what are the odds of that happening ha ha thanks Always!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I'll be darn, he did. I never read what other's say until after i comment, but today, i didn't read them LOL You must know that the line was poignant since we both picked up on it.

      Smiles(:D

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Always, THank you Acer pointed out that line as well lol

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful Bella! ' Is yesterday just another day that brings us today?' Brilliant!!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Pop, Thanks a bunch!! :)

      Thanks for the visit I appreciate it!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      breakfastpop 6 years ago

      You are truly gifted. This is so beautiful. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Kimmie, Back at you sweetness... Thanks a bunch!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

      big ))))))))))))hugs((((((((((((

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Thanks Sub. You are truly special!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Beautiful, Bella, good job.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Acer, I want to believe so too!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Is yesterday just another day that brings in today:

      I can ethereally and lovingly believe that your history teaches you Bella.;)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Billy Bear, That was beautiful!!!

      We can take flight....

      smiles :)

      bella

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      With all our might, we all to often, walk alone

      We lust for flight, our hearts of love

      Crush of loneliness, to the bone

      Dream of something, like a glove

      Yet for some of us, a long ways back

      A strength to be alone we ever lacked

      Lets come together, you and I

      Deep friends forever

      Together, we fly...