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Removing The Mask

Updated on January 26, 2012

Flip an hourglass
twist an image
shatter a mirror
revealing creation

Conform to the same old
contorting to average
predictable, standard

Arise through the sky
overlooking your earth
undertaking the task
of removing the mask


Strum away at the strings

melodic Heaven


your hearing

Lost in sound's sea

swimming through keys



Play the harp

like a heart

like a beat



when and

where and

why and

how ?

ask not

speak not

think not

only hear

an idea

a concept

a notion

for motion

to listen

to heed

to react

to achieve

to renew

to believe

to escape

to conceive

© copyright Ben D.A - 2012


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    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Love the force, the aggression, the power, startlingly invigorating!

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      Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

      Lots going on here, Ben. I really liked the way you delivered the message here. Voted UP. WB

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      Augustine A Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

      Awesome poem and music. Thank you for sharing.

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      superior word crafting Ben, you can lead a heart through a myriad emotions and can always be thought provoking too. Brilliant!

    • Eiddwen profile image

      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Great work and thanks for sharing.

      Take care


    • Senoritaa profile image

      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Interesting read. Flows beautifully.

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Wonderful flow that pulls the reader effortlessly in

      A great write again :)

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      BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Thanks Randy! I did like the rhythm as well

    • Randy Behavior profile image

      Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I liked these. You really have some rhythm going.

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