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Rescue Me (Poetry)

Updated on February 11, 2016

Rescue Me

My universe,

Space that I have chosen,

Extreme somewhat,

One might not care to notice.

Hot summer breezes,

Darkness exchanges places with light,

Stale liquor morning drinks.

She floated into my space

With the deadbeats and the rowdies.

Intensity and sweet demore,

Eyes silent as stars,

A goddess demanding attention.

She feeds herself to my heart

Measuring elements of flavor.

I have to run-have to flee

Before fate does its part

And I am left

With another

Lonely teardrop.

The Future

Love is an addiction sequestered in the heart, demanding satisfaction

Assess the roads that you travel. The mental force of love liberates the soul. Good in the world is increased when your actions benefit others. My book, Positive Romance by Rudy Lopez, looks at all matters of the heart with encouraging and compromising attitudes. It is available on any major online book store or any public library will request it for you at no cost or may be purchased at www.eloquentbooks.com/PositiveRomance.html

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      Rudy Lopez 19 months ago from Dallas

      Thank you Dana Tate, I went through this one time so I put it into words.

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      Dana Tate 19 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Beautiful words. I loved it.

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      Rudy Lopez 19 months ago from Dallas

      Thank you jgshorebird

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      manatita44 19 months ago from london

      Again a loving Hub and write. Wish you all success, Rudy. Dios te bendiga Y acompane. Hasta La proxima!

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      jgshorebird 19 months ago from Southeastern U.S.

      My favorite line is "Eyes silent as stars."

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      Rudy Lopez 19 months ago from Dallas

      Thank you lady guitarpicker glad you enjoyed it.

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      stella vadakin 19 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Very different, but I like the style.

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      moonlake 20 months ago from America

      Enjoyed your poem.

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      Word 20 months ago from Chicago

      Pretty cool piece of poetry.

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      Shaloo Walia 20 months ago

      Interesting!

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      Rudy Lopez 20 months ago from Dallas

      Thank you Missy Smith your opinion means a lot to me.

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      Missy Smith 20 months ago from Florida

      I like the exchange of words in this one. They seem to flip a different beat but bouncing off each other. I hope that makes sense? It's how I interpreted it while reading it. Very unique!