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Rest my love

Updated on March 6, 2013

Our Sunset


Rest my love


My love,

I dream of you with each blink of the eyes. When I lay down at night, the cold emptiness in my arms is dissipated by, the warmth of your spirit that holds me, each night. Truly, you are the magical miracle that gives me hope that there will be a better tomorrow.

All of my life I have stood in the blackened void until a gentle star appeared. As the star drew closer to me, I watched it take the form of an angel that is you. I beg of you, forever shine your light upon me that I may no longer stand in the empty darkness I have known for all these years.

Keep the crystal ball far from my presence for I need nothing to show me the future. For, I already have seen my future in your eyes and I know it is the greatest future I could have prayed for, never-ending. Truly, there is no, uncertainty in where life shall lead me for I know that with you by my side, I will walk along the golden path.

When I hold you, I can feel the heavens begun to hum as our bodies touch so softly and so gently. Each kiss is a kiss filled with true love and passion. Each move of my hand upon your skin is indeed, my spirit touching yours. The closer our bodies become, the more intertwined our souls crave to be until we are, united as one.

When your silken wet lips touch the fire that burns in mine, I feel my spirit leap within me. My muscles tighten at your delicate touch as passion rages within me to grab you with gentle force, driving you deeply into my arms against my bare chest. Pull me closer to you and gently moan that I may know my presence brings you as much pleasure as I you have given to me.

The gift of your love far outweighs any gift I could possibly imagine or desire. You have shown me a whole new world in which these words are for you and you, alone. I know that my gift is, humbled by what you have given me but this is what I have to give you…my heart.

You own my very existence. No other shall I allow my love to entertain. My love is for you and no one else. My love is for the one that has given me hope and taken me from the barren wasteland of the void. My love for you will outlast time and should you every doubt my love for you, look into my eyes and you will see the truth of how I feel.

What words can I say to capture your heart? What can I do to prove to you that I am forever faithful and forever true to you, my love? Surely, I have bled for you, I have worn the skin from my body with labor and I have cried every day with longing for you. Tell me, my darling…tell me what it is that I may do to please you that you will stay with me forever?

Every day, I will work to provide for you. Every day, I will not fail to say, ‘I love you,’ and tell you what you mean to me. Every day, I will listen to you and hear your sweet words. I promise to be attentive, caring, compassionate and loving. You truly are a miracle and a blessing. Truly, I respect you for the wonderful person you are and I admire you for being so much more than I could ever hope to be. Indeed, you are my equal in all ways and yet, you are so much more.

Rest, my love and let me cook you dinner. Set yourself at ease while I clean the house and admire your beauty. Allow me to spoil you with love and dedication. Deeds are the actions whereby we may judge the hearts of others and it is by my deeds that I want you to see how much I truly love you.

Forever Yours,


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    • W. K. Hayes profile image

      Warren Keith Hayes 15 months ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you, everyone for your kind and touching words. I am looking forward to writing more thanks to the encouragement you guys have given. me. Thank you.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      Hi W.K.Hayes,

      thanks for this eloquent and quite delightful

      hub that you have presented here I really appreciate it.

      voted up.

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      Mary 4 years ago from From the land of Chocolate Chips,and all other things sweet.

      This is beautiful, very lovely, voted up, beautiful and shared.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      Nice read

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      Jennifer Lynch 6 years ago from Stowmarket, Suffolk.

      Hi, That blew me away. The description was amazing and I could visualise it all so clearly. Just pure magic. Jennifer

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      granniesharon 6 years ago

      wow, that's beautiful

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      Susan Mills 6 years ago from Indiana

      Wow. If you aren't completely and desperately in love, you are the greatest writer ever.

      If you ARE completely and desperately in love, you portray it as well as the greatest writer.

      Awesome and beautiful.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Hi Alastar Packer...The mountains are wonderful...I alwasysaid I would either retire to the beach or the mountains. Also,thank you for the compliment...I look forard to reading your work.

      Hi really is great to meet others that know hat True Love really is. I can hearthe difference in love songs. Some love songs are about love butthey lack that experience...and such a wonderful experience it truly is.

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      junko 6 years ago

      As I read your hub I really felt blessed. I've alway Known my love for my wife and her love for me was a blessing With the exception of me cooking, and the long passionate kisses. We are living your hub on all levels of love. I'm mature enough to now express to my wife in other words and in the same words you wrote. We were blessed to celebrate 40 years of marriage last month. Your hub let me know that someone else other than I have been blessed with love in their life. It gets better with time. Good hub, do it again.

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      Alastar Packer 6 years ago from North Carolina

      W.K., the word is spreading round the grapevine about you. I used to imagine that my prose and poetry to a love was good; but you, dear fellow, have caused an instant reconsideration. Got a feeling were not far apart geo-wise:the beach is beautiful right now;how are those mountains?

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you everyone...True love is a gift that should be cherished and adored and I, for one, believe in giving my all in the name of love.

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      Shyla's Nana 6 years ago

      What beautiful words you have written. I can picture you doing all of these things while the woman you love is resting. And I am sure she appreciates those things and loves you immensely. I am sure she not only enjoyed the dinner but mostly your company as well. You are truly a wonderful man. Take care. Voting this up and clicking your tabs:)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      This is totally stunning. What a brilliant partner you must be to love her as intensely as this. You are one in a million and to top it all you write beautifully and indeed with so much passion. May this wonderful union continue in married bliss. I adore the picture too - stunning. Voting up and definitely pressing your buttons.

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      ThunderKeys 6 years ago

      Holy crap that's good writing!

      - Duddy.

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      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      I have major goosebumps reading this tribute to your love. Wow, what a lucky woman to have a man so in touch with his feelings. I love how you express your love for her and how you went from blackened void to the light. I like your metaphor of her as the star. Just beautiful writing:)Thanks for the uplift and smiles on this dark, gloom day.