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Return of the shadow – the poem

Updated on August 23, 2012
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A day was hanging on

from the naked branch of

a torn calendar,

A zero watt bulb was

Waiting for the dusk to step

down from hanger.

Silhouette sun is there

And some burnt ash

Of crumbling memory,

For the past was little

Diluted of vision for tears

were flowing ebony.

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Some empty crescendo

Engulfing my breathing

With white soft petals,

Seventh heaven was

Drifting the essence as

sense turned to crystals.

So much discord in the

Eternity to freedom

for agony herald,

A complete resonance

Without core at the

Day break for a stroke,

In the heart of heart

Known fact lies clear

No retort swells choke.

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Heaven knew the truth

Go away dear

As much you hope,

Your shadow will return

To me for sure

when dusk will rope.

My arms will open wide

To embrace the

Tired shadow,

The zero watt bulbs will

Shine bight to climb

the furrow.


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Death engulfed me

With petals of white crystal

When a day embraced

the dusk.

Life herald agony history

For death is

mesmeric mystery,

Sand watch tickled the

Crumbling ash of the

dusk to mingle with trance ebony.

Some sand and golden sun

Dinning and winning

As sense goes to change the

Calendar page !!!!!!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you from bottom of my heart for your kind visit and precious words here. Its much appreciated. You liked my work and that is much important for me really. All readers who take time off to comment on the works are very valuable indeed for every writer of any sort. But the way tried to feel the inherent emotion in the poem is really great. Nice to have you as my friend. Thanks once again.

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      Amy 4 years ago from Chicago

      I am so happy to know that your poetry is ecclectic. I see you often use a rhyme scheme, but here i love that you did not. The flow seems so much more natural with the words you chose here. Beautiful message and composure. I love the image of the torn calendar and the poet building the strength to leave behind the past month and move on to the next. Change and moving on is an everyday obstacle. Great poem dghbrh, well done yet again!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      oh dear Spy,

      thank you so much for your precious comment here.

      I am very much delighted to know that you love my poem.

      deergha

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      very creative in style. i love your poems.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Jan,

      Thank you for your visit and comment......here. Its so nice to know that you are thrilled by my poem:-)

      deergha

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Lovely, spirity poem. Mysterious words which twist and turn.

      Your poems are always a thrill!

      Jan

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Rahul.....your visit and comment is much welcome here. You are very kind ..... I am just at a very initial stage of writing....just trying my hand and ideas to give some form.Thanks.

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      Thank you@flashmakeit....for you are really very kind......it feels nice to know that you are finding it beautiful:-)

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      Dear Faith......

      Thank you for your kind reply.....Its always a pleasure to get your visit here.

      In His Love, ( i really love to see this dear )

      Deergha.....

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      Thank you @ Integrity....I am much grateful to have a friend like you here for your continual inspiration.

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      Dear Gypsy,

      It feels so nice to know that you have found it interesting.

      Have a great day ahead dear, friend:-)

      Deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and interesting. Mysterious and imaginative.

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      WHOA! I voted up for sure.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very haunting piece of poetry. Excellent. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      You have a very creative writing style and I thought this poem was mysterious and beautiful!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Powerfully painful and haunting..

      Flawless epic poetry....