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Rhythmical Literary Pieces

Updated on May 13, 2011

 

 I hold on to both sides

Not seeking a fun ride

Hands wrapped around

Feet not touching ground

Seated on top a plank

Drawing mental blanks

As the ice trickles down

Allowing my body to frown

Connected to metal links

Time passing within my blinks

Temperature below the zero

Will I be rescued by a hero?

 

 

Source

I drive down the road, pitch black

Driving so fast should I look back?

Just one last look before I leave

If I do will it misconceive?

I glance over to my side mirror

I’ve never seen it so clearer

Thirty seconds to green

Leaving behind this past scene

To leave or to stay which will I choose

Will I happily win or sadly loose

A decision not so nicely said

Stepped on the pedal before it turned red

Source

 

Standing in the shallow

Hoping for everything mellow

Will my light ever shine?

Boxed within my mind

White screen reflected

My mind so unprotected

Just trapped within my walls

Hoping my ceiling won’t fall

The waves are coming in strong

Take me to where I belong

I know this isn’t my home

I wish to no longer roam

 

Restore my health

Give me strength

Give me wealth

Restore life length

Give me Fame

Give me Fortune

Handed shame

Handed misfortune

If I wish upon tonight

Once again visual sight

Wrinkled faces

Wrinkled hands

History traces

Age demands

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    • bellawritter23 profile image
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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Frank, Thanks a bunch!! For the clicks and likes!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      amazing I just loved it voted up and awesome too!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Ok I will keep my eyes peeled

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      yep just havent been on hub lately and havent had time to write. but nelliana gave me an idea from one of her hubs i read today, so i may be posting something soon. keep an eye out. thanks!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Thanks Nikki sunrays lol I haven't read anything of yours lately hope all is well....

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      the pictures fit each poem so well. good work bella blossom!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Janet, Thank you dear friend! I am grateful you were able to enjoy it!!

      Acer, YOu think so??

      Eid, You are truly someone special that holds a piece of my heart. I thank you with every word I say! thank you again!!

      Ace, Thanks friend I appreciate it!!

      Denise, I am happy you thought so!!

      Johnny, Thanks friend!!

      Epi, you make me giggle like a 5 year old who won a star student of the month award. YOur words carry so much meaning and depth I appreciate having you within my hub world!! As Always...

      Andy Warhol is the greatest with his images!!

      smiles all :)

      bella

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..pure poetry for those people in the know (even me, although I remain, yours truly, as an 'outsider' to this genre - preferring to deconstruct and subvert it (somewhat) but that said and a little shameless self-promotion for epi (grinning like a Cheshire cat) you are and will always be my queen - Bellaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

      And I love your 'nod' to Andy Warhol in your profile image - gotta admit - there's only one you!!!! And believe me - it's a royally fabulous YOU !!!!!

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      absolutely amazing. i love the images now in my heart. Beautiful Bella. and up .

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      Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

      Cool rhythm and rhyme.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      A very intense poem, beautifully written as always.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Hi bella, may you have every single moment of happiness and care that you deserve. You have given us the honour of being able to share your talent.

      A talent of being able to convey your message in your beautiful words .

      Your words also say so much about the person who wrote them.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Hold On Bella,Underdog Will Save You,lol...really though this is an intelligently thoughtful and intense poem.;)

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      tumblintumblweed 6 years ago

      Great write, Bella! Really enjoyed it! Voted up!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Me too :)

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      I soooo love crazy minds...=P

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Pop, thank you I say give it a shot bring out that dusty poetry pen you've been hidding please do.....

      Shan, Thank you very kindly you touch my soul with warmth and happiness you place a huge grin on my face that I was able to bring out such lovely words of you!

      billy, Hey what can I say its just this silly ole mind going crazy nothing major. lol ;)

      sub, Thanks for riding with me I enjoyed the ride as well!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      A really good one, Bellawritter23, with this one I was able to ride along. Good job.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      You better be ready for fame and fortune, for it will wash over you like a huge wave when it hits, because, you, my dearest friend, are there with your writing. Let the world be poured over by you, and soon...

      This is another, dare I say it, majestic piece by our beloved Ms. Bella...

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      shanaya 6 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      My Dear Bells! So Touchy POEM you have written. Wonderful WORK.

      "It's not that I wanna have it, it's just that I wanna deserve it".

      You deserve HAPPINESS Bella. And you will get what ever you want.

      GOD BLESS YOU:) UP so HIGHHHHHHH, Beautiful, Awesome.:)

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      breakfastpop 6 years ago

      Awesome. You make me want to try my hand at poetry. It's been a long time for me. Voted up awesome and beautiful.