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Ripples (tanka)

Updated on July 18, 2013

Upon a river

Coursing toward its destiny

There fell a flower

Which started endless ripples

Which are still felt in the rain


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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Really amazing!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Oh, so true. With the rain, will they never cease?

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      And the ripples go ever outwards. Beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You have the gift Martin. Loved it....

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Beautiful indeed - love this so much...

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very awesome my friend !

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Very beautiful and excellent job here. Voted up

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      So that's why the rain smells like roses. Smiles. Beautifully done per usual.

      Best Always,


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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      Beautiful picture and verse. Have a great day!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, this is stunningly beautiful and imagery too! Really nice one here, Mh!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper