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Rivers Of Sadness (tanka)

Updated on October 7, 2015

Rivers of sadness

How long will you continue

Toward the vast ocean

Which in its time bore countless

Secrets of the broken heart


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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      This is gorgeous Martin!

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      Frank Atanacio 19 months ago from Shelton

      awesome my friend :)

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 19 months ago from The Caribbean

      Beautiful imagery though on sadness. Good writing!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 19 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely but sad sentiments.

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      Shauna L Bowling 19 months ago from Central Florida

      Such bittersweet beauty in your words, Martin!

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