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RlahaPoetry

Updated on October 27, 2011

My poetry... 1

JUMBLED BRAIN

So many ideas, so many words;

The brain cannot process them all at once.

Where to begin?

How to be organized?

And how to end?


The words must come together slowly

And flow smoothly onto the paper

So that a tale can be told with excitement

To coax and intrigue the reader to want to read more.


Such a tale needs a lot of thought

So that wordplay can be used

And the reader will have a slew of emotions

On reading the tale

Leaving one with a sense of satisfaction and wonder at the end.


Again I ask you, "Where do I begin?

How do I get my thoughts organized and

Howe will I end the tale?

Will I be able to deliver the tale so that you can enjoy it?"

Only YOU can tell me.

-Written by Rani Laha (rlaha)

on 10.26.2011

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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Lovely! :)

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      chrisam01 5 years ago from Los Angeles, California, USA

      This is every writers challenge, goal, satisfaction. I have a jumbled brain too.

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      @Hattie: Thank you :)

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      @Chrisam: Yes, it is. I always have to stop and formulate what I want to write down before I can do so. Even then though, my brain thinks faster than my hand can write the words down. Thanks for reading this!

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      chrisam01 5 years ago from Los Angeles, California, USA

      It takes practice. Good luck!

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      Thank you!

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      RedElf 5 years ago from Canada

      Very clever "how-to" - I enjoyed it very much.

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      Thanks :)

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Your questions are thought provoking. I felt good to read this.

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      Thank you!

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...and that's why it's called Riaha Poetry - no one does it quite like you - an original voice in writing to be sure ...... lake erie time ontario canada 2:26pm

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      Thanks epigramman! :)

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