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Rocket Ship~ short inspirational poem

Updated on September 15, 2011
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I call this one "Rocket Ship"

I'm movin so fast

I don't know what I've become

Just yesterday

My world was dim and crumb

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Suddenly i see

Suddenly it's me

Suddenly I'm free

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How did I get here

Who helped me thru

Was it God or was it you?

Life is anew

I'll always be me

The girl who kissed the tree

But now I sincerely feel free to be me

I don't get it yet

Someday I'm sure I will

Maybe I CAN feel good

and never have to take a pill or feel ill

This world is like a cage

And I'm one of the lab rats being tested

I'm infested

Can I get arrested

Why am I being bested?

Can I come out of this cage?

Or will I always feel the rage

Perhaps somehow I found the hole

That freed Alice

My new goal

to be free mindfully

to remain a believer yet more of a dreamer

and still be me.

Are you living your dream? Or still stagnant and stuck?

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      hey,

      (Shadesbreath)

      nice to see you again

      I like your comment, you are cool yourself :P :)

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      Shadesbreath 6 years ago from California

      You're like a spirit rapper, rhyming for nice things that uplift. Very cool.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      Thanks Micky Dee, my new hub https://hubpages.com/literature/The-End-of-Control is out! Under my other alias, blondey :) thx!

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Yes ma'am. God bless you! Hang in there. We're on the ropes some time. God bless you schoolgirlforreal.

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      schoolgirlforreal 6 years ago from USA

      :)

      rich-always nice to seeyou my friend! God bless you!

      breakfastpop- God bless you ,thanks!

      Hi pearl,

      A better comment I couldn't think of my sweet. Luv to you,

      Dave- bless you

      Druid- Love ya! Thanks for that email :)

      Mythbuster- Oh the intellect! Nice summing up ;)

      I'm glad you enjoyed my brother Michael ...;)

      Thankyou! for the validation, very nice. Thankyou

      So NICE to see you!!

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      mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

      Hang in there, schoolgirlforreal. Nice expression through poetry - and a fitting vid you selected to accompany your words. I've enjoyed your poem and can identify with the concepts in it - especially these lines:

      "Can I come out of this cage?

      Or will I always feel the rage

      Perhaps somehow I found the hole

      That freed Alice

      My new goal

      to be free mindfully [...]"

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      Druid Dude 6 years ago

      AS OF 11-1-01, we entered a phase of the apocalypse, the revealing. It's all God, working through us to bring about the advent. COOL! Peace schoolgirl

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      Dave Mathews 6 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

      God made you unique. There is not another you, not on this planet.Keep focused on God, He is your "NorthStar" Trust in all God's Holy Spirit tells you and when asked something by God, obey immediately without hesitation. He will guide you every step of the way and His way is "Perfect"

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      pearlmacb 6 years ago from Switzerland

      You are free, give yourself permission to shine! own your uniques, Im a great believer of being who God has created you to be, its the only way you will be ultimately happy/content. stay firm in faith....your innerSelf/spirit holds the true source of power not your mind if you let it.

      All the best to you, thank you for sharing.

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      breakfastpop 6 years ago

      Never let go of your inner self.

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      Run your own race and at your own speed. If we dance to the tune of others then we will never be happy; sing your own song and be happy!

      Cheers and God bless!