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Romantic Friends

Updated on January 24, 2011

Holding of hands

The sound of laughter

No talk of meaning

Or what comes after

Enjoying a touch

A tender embrace

The feel of your lips

Upon my face

Talking like friends

Sharing some time

Needing no reasons

Without any rhyme

Saying goodnight

A kiss at the door

No innocence lost

No talk of more

We’re two of a kind

Too gentle a breed

A break from the playground is

Just what we need

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    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      I like that, Erin LeDreamy - do you think they'd catch on that it was a pen name??? lol Oh Epi, you take my heart away too!

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ....well I always like holding hands with your words - they're so ..... dreamy ...... Erin LeDreamy!!!!!!

      You take my breath away and my heart that went with it!!!!!!

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Thanks Doug, Fun, easy loose - I loved those words. Thanks for the wonderful comment - yes, it was something I needed to write right now. L & P

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      Doug Turner Jr. 

      7 years ago

      Fun and easy to read, very loose. Enjoyed this; like a brisk walk in the park. Well done.

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Thank you Saddlerider, of course you are playing with me and the rest of the gang in the playground of life! I'm glad you felt it, I think we all are - same rules of engagement, we all just are in different stages, different circles and sometimes they intertwine...its what makes it all so interesting. I just happen to be sitting with my friend under a tree right now watching some butterflies and enjoying some time out. Love and Peace to you. thanks for the ratings and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Ruby, nice to see you again, it is great! Is it possible to hold it there suspended in time or will life carry it along and make it complex and worrisome like everything else? Who's to know? Love and Peace.

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      saddlerider1 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful tempo and rhyme. I felt like I was playing with you in the playground of life. Bravo, rated UP nicely done.

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Thanks for visiting mylife! I'm so glad you liked it, it seems from the response that everyone has someone that was a friend and the best times were when things were unencumbered and just taken lightly. Makes me wonder if its possible to stay this way. Love and Peace.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Aha, this is great!! A love that's a friend, asking for nothing more than holding hands and a kiss at the door. Now that's what i call a true friend.

      Cheers

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      Casey Coulter 

      7 years ago from Wisconsin

      Great Poem really had a great flow to it. Reminded me of one of my ex girlfriends who was really just like my best friend. Thanks for sharing!

      Stay Happy and True ---mylife=adventure =]

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Sally, thanks so much for your comment; yes, never taken lightly.

      Nell! cheers my friend! it is tough to keep that way, and we know it! just talked about that tonight, so strong and yet so fragile the liaisons we keep!

      Penny my sister! So glad to see you back! That's a lot to offer, meant every word of course! talk to you soon.

      Love and Peace to you all.

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      pennyofheaven 

      7 years ago from New Zealand

      Dearest sister,

      Sweet, tender, deep and meaningful is all I have to offer about your poem. I loved it thanks!

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      b, thanks so much, yes, very special and so fragile to stay at this stage.

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      Nell Rose 

      7 years ago from England

      Hi, ah bless! lol what a lovely poem, such an innocent friendship, I sometimes wish it had stayed that way! ah, well memories! cheers nell

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      Truckstop Sally 

      7 years ago

      Love your poem. No conquest, broken promises, expectation, disappointment . . . Friends! Should never be taken lightly.

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      b. Malin 

      7 years ago

      Lovely tribute to a special friendship. Thanks for sharing this poem.

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      VV68, thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I needed to write something different to give my brain a break :) Love and Peace.

      Aunt Gerda, thanks for commenting, I'm so glad you liked it! xoxoxo

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      gerda 

      7 years ago

      So lovley, XOXOXO

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      vietnamvet68 

      7 years ago from New York State

      beautiful poem my dear friend. God Bless

    • Erin LeFey profile imageAUTHOR

      Erin LeFey 

      7 years ago from Maryland

      Hi Hanna, nice to meet you! Thanks for the comment and thanks for visiting!

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      Helpful Hanna 

      7 years ago

      Hi Erin. This is so well written. Great hub!

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