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Season of Love: Haiku Collection

Updated on July 6, 2017

Dear Readers, Hello.

How are you today?

Writing Haiku is new to me and surpraisingly more difficult than writing long usual poem. But under Sa`ge help, I managed to made several. (Thank you, Sa`ge! Love you! Emmuah!)

This Haiku being collected under the same theme, Love. Several of it being made when I still floating after hearing love line from the one I care so much. You know how how it feel, right? Floating... floating... seem never want to go back down! LOL. Ah, a happy moment in our life!


Anyway, I hope you like it. And, Polar Bear, of course this is for you. :X

Have a nice day, my friends!

Freya

It's really how the Haiku being formed. Under this love spell. ^_^

Love Spell


Under love spell, I


Sleep tightly holding a dream


In silent, I sing


Hazel Eye


Hazel eyes, yours are


Brown and green, its golden spring


Lock you to my sight



Word


Word of thousand things


Hold all seasons in one dream


Love, and yours is mine


Summer Love


Hope Embracing tight


Floating by your words, I bathe


Summer love has come


Mine

Winter heart you hid


Become spring under my spell


Say! Now it is mine


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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Sir. Nice to meet you here. Yes, Pearldiver has many beautiful Haiku. But I never read Russ Baleson works. Thank you for informed me.

    I found Haiku really hard to make. Keep giving me headache. But unless for first trial they are okay for me. Make the next Haiku become too hard to make. Hhhh... We tend to give ourself worst critic, right?

    Thank you, Larry. :)

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    maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

    These are wonderful haiku...an amazing first effort...Voted up and pushed the beautiful button, hard...

    I find haiku such a wonderful way to express worlds of meaning within a disciplined cadence, requiring concentration and imagination...

    Russ Baleson and Pearldiver are two of my favorite haiku samurai here on HubPages...I am adding you to the list...Thank you for sharing these first haiku with us...Larry

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    SilentReed, you make me smile with your comment too, so we are even. LOL. Thank you for you too. I love have you as my friend. :)

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    SilentReed 6 years ago from Philippines

    Freya, you make me smile with your comment. thank you for your friendship

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    LOL. Go on, SilentReed; be in love again. Be free again, even under restriction. :)

    Thank you for reading this. :)

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    SilentReed 6 years ago from Philippines

    Your Haiku make me want to be in love again :) to be free, no restriction

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    BKCreative, let me be your student. They are hard to made! :(

    Neverletitgo, Than you, Abdi. I'm glad you like it. :)

    Acaetnna, No dear, I picturing the one I love and writing haiku about him, and then after it is done, I look for perfect pictures to fit with it. Thank you very much to those photographer who already provided these pictures. those are very beautiful indeed. Thank you, dear. :)

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    acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

    These are just wonderful and you have chosen the pictures so well. Did you actually choose the pictures first and then write the haiku to match? I guess you did because they fit so perfectly.

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    Neverletitgo 6 years ago from Minneapolis, MN

    This is lovely and beautiful haiku. Good job freya.

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    BkCreative 6 years ago from Brooklyn, New York City

    Oooh, I love that you wrote haikus with lovely photos. I taught haiku to my students some years ago and they loved it. The counting syllables, learning to include nature. Just a very creative way to...well, create! Rated up!

    Thanks a million!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, twentyfive. I am glad you like it. Welcome to my hub. ^_^ It is nice to meet you here.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge, you making me laugh so hard! I don't know if I can do that but I will try. Lol. Wish me luck! hehehe...

    One year feel like already so long. Still you beat me on number of Hubs. lol.

    Have a nice day, dear.

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    twentyfive 6 years ago

    So refreshing. Lovely verse! Those photos match with the beauty that dwells in your words. Thumbs up! :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Hey girl Congratulations on your your ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY with HP :D

    ok, I give you idea if you stuck, then write haiku about you stuck and where you stuck or how you stuck hehe mud, clay, water, dirt, rocks, sky, hehehe. am sure there in your brain there is something. . LOL love you girl :D hugs :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Nell. I wish it can be that easy. @_@ I am stuck now and not able to created even one. LOL. Ah, so lame.

    Thank you, dear for your encouragement. You are so sweet. :)

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    Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, this is beautiful! and the pictures are perfect for it, well done! if this is your first proper Haiku, then you are going to be great doing the rest! cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Wayne Brown. I am trying at my best to be good student always. LOL. I'm glad you enjoy this. Thank you, Sir.

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    Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

    Freya...You are a very good student as evidenced by your work here....love truly does span the seasons in it own way! WB

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Can't help it, Sa'ge. I put too much expectation on myself and those erased Haiku is not meet the need. LOL. I can be really demanding for myself indeed.

    I just see your email. Will read and answer soon after, again, the google being nice to me. Or it is my connection? Hhhh... Anyway, big hug for you! :)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Urieeeeel! So long not see. I see your email, but google not allowing me to open that for while now. Really making me upset. Will reply to you back soon after google act nice.

    Thank you, dear. Will visit you soon. :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Freya don

    g erase them change them around move words around or take words away put different words in. play with different words in same haiku. :D hugs :D

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    Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

    Freyaaaaaaa ...miss u a lottt how are u doing? \LOVELY/ poem :D:D:D best regards to all

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Agusfanani: Thank you. Yes, those are really beautiful pictures, right?

    Sa'ge: I hope so. I really want to make a good one. I made several but not good enough so I erased them. Need so much to learn. Thank you, Sa'ge. Always love to hug you back. :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Five at a time is good for one who just starts out. I told you you hade this gift in you hehehe. I saw it in your other writings. It showed itself to me. The more you do he easier they will get. Your mind will fall into a flow of seasonal connections with living and all the things around us that touch our life daily in each moment of time. :D hugs :D

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    agusfanani 6 years ago from Indonesia

    That's a beautiful poem and the pictures make it even more beautiful.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Eiddwen: Thank you for reading and commenting. It is hard to not share happiness in my heart. ^_^

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky Dee: That will be nice, Sir. But even if I don't have all love in the world, 3 love is enough for me; which is from God, from my family and the man I love. ^_*. Thank you, King Micky.

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    Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

    Beautiful words and pictures Freya. You are one great writer.

    Thank you so much for sharing!!

    Take care and God Bless.

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    I wish you all the love in the world.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge, it is hard to made! I want to make 10 but only able to came out with 5 at that time. 6 with Slugabed though. So haaaaard! Thank you to show me how to made it, dear.

    Hug back and thanks for the dance.

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Beautiful Freya, you did it. You create beautiful haiku.

    my favorite on is "hope embracing tight". These are indeed beautiful. You graduate :D hugs :D I dance on all your tabs and them broke. I dance to much heheh. :D hugs :D and I loved all the pictures. :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Chris. I am glad you like it. It is hard to made for me. :)

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    carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Very pretty, Freya!!!!