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SHORT STORY OF A TRAGIC LOVE

Updated on April 14, 2013

***this is not my own story, just sharing it***


What can I say about a girl I loved since I was ten... that I love the way she laughs at me when I commit mistakes, the way she fusses over silly things and even the way she cries over some sad silly late night show...

She was my best friend and I have known her since we were small. She knew all my secrets, which reveals my feelings for her, that I love her not only because she's pretty and smart but also the way she laughs at everything and the way she sees life and love. I could still remember the first time we met; I was five years old then. It was one windy afternoon having no one to play with except for my best friend, Troy. He and his family just moved out to a neighboring state at transfer because his father got promoted. And so I climbed up our tree house, I saw a moving truck coming down the street. I watched it approaching and noticed a family station wagon following it. It stopped in front of the house and out came a family. I was about to glance away when came out the loveliest girl I've ever seen.

She was four years old that time but then even at an early age she was a beauty. She had long curly hair, which reached almost to her waist. She had fair complexion and eyes which could make a man lose his heart into them. I continued to watch her when suddenly she looked up and saw me watching them in the tree house window. I was about to duck when she smiled and waved her hand. I waved back and then watched in amazement as I saw her running towards the tree house. So I went to the edge of the ladder and said, "Would you like to come up?" she answered, "May I?" So I help her climb up and when she reached the top she then turned to me and said, "By the way, my name's Sam, what's yours?" I answered, "My name is Christopher but then you can call me Chris." She smiled and said, "Well I like your name. Hey your tree house's neat!" then I replied, "Thanks! Troy and I made this. This used to be our hide out. We used to goof around, play ball and go biking together. He was my best friend and I kind of miss him you know." She smiled and said "I'm here now, we could do things you do with Troy and I could be your new best friend too. I never had a boy for a friend before so it could be exciting to have one. I could learn how to play ball and I have my bicycle so we could go biking together. Now how does that sound to you?" I smiled and said, "Well that sounds good enough." Then she held her hand and said, "It's a deal then!"

So that's how it started. So we became best friends and it was kind of strange at first for she was a girl and there are things which I was little bit hesitant to indulge her like catching frogs, swimming in the lake and climbing trees, but then she tried and did everything just to please me. There was even a time when she fell off the bike trying to catch up with me in a race we had and I was the one who bandaged her scraped knee. I could still remember the time when she hit the window of our neighbor when we were playing baseball and it was I who talked to Mr. Chambers and promised to pay for the damage, which meant having to loose a week's allowance. I remembered the time when I fell off the tree when I tried to rescue a little kitten because Sam was near to tears when she saw the helpless kitten trapped in a branch. I even fought with the tough guy when they teased Sam and made her cry and I ended up having a black eye and a bruised cheek. I remember Sam crying as she placed an ice bag over the damaged eye and later gave it a get-well kiss. I did everything to please her and gave everything her little heart desires.


The lake was our favorite hang out. We had our Saturday swim routine. We would pack food and later eat them under the big oak tree. There was a special branch in which the two of us could sit together and tell each other's dreams. She dreams of being a Ballerina and she knows my dream of becoming a doctor. She never laughs at my dreams and pursuits even if they were quite impossible. It made me like her even more.

As years went by, I noticed that my feelings towards her were slowly changing. Somehow, I thought it was just a simple crush case. But when I started thinking about her at night, dreaming of her and having the feeling of wanting to be with her all the time, I thought it was something different, something that made me feel strange, but then it was exhilarating feeling. It made me feel so alive. Whenever our hands touch, I could feel the tingling sensation in my spine. Once when we were at the lake having our Saturday swim routine and as I carried her towards the water edge, I had the feeling of not wanting to let go. I just wanted that moment to continue hoping it would never end. I then realized I was slowly falling in love with my best friend.

Many times I tried to deny the feeling for I was scared to imagine what would happen if ever I'd try to tell her how I feel about her. I was scared because she might think that I'm taking advantage of her and our friendship. I was afraid of losing her so I just kept my feeling hidden.

We reached the age of fifteen and I noticed that Sam grew lovelier each day. How my heart aches wherever I see boys glance her way. I want to punch their noses as I watch them talking to her giving compliments, flowers and chocolates. There were times when I watch her at a distance with mixed feelings of anger and hurt! Because it hurts so much to know that there were so many things I wanted to tell her but then I could not do so. There were so many presents which I long to give her but then I could not for she might see me only as a friend. I was also scared of letting her know how I feel about her as much as losing her.

Then one day, I just learned from a friend that she already had a boyfriend. At first, I tried to convince myself that it was just a rumor. Her boyfriend was Mark, a popular senior, who was the heartthrob of the campus. She, being the cheerleader was close to the basketball team to which Mark was the captain. When I saw them walking together at the parking lot that afternoon, I watched her with my heart slowly breaking into pieces. I saw her wave at me but I just pretended not to see her for I was scared that she might see in my eyes the pain I'm feeling inside because of seeing her with another guy. Those days that followed where the saddest days of my life. How my heart aches when I see her walk by me with him at her side. Every time we meet in hallways and I see him around her, there's a feeling inside me that makes me want to grab her away from him. How it hurts to see the girl I long possess was now owned by somebody else. That special smile I long for her to cast on me was now casted on him. As she passes by me she doesn't know that I whisper the words "God how I love you."

Then one faithful day they broke up. She came too me that evening crying on my shoulder. They had a big fight and it ended up with their break up. Mixed feelings were scaring me inside. I was happy because she was free and maybe I would have the chance of telling her my true feelings for her but then I was feeling so bad because she is crying her heart out just for him. At that time, I was not quite sure of what I wanted to do.

So we found ourselves doing what we did in old days with our Saturday swim routine, spending time in our tree house. We still enjoyed doing childish pranks for we still are both young at heart. So many chances I had for me to confess my feelings for her but still I couldn't bring myself to her for I was scared of losing her once more. I once lost her, now I could not bear of losing her again by telling her, "I love her". So I just kept my feelings even if it was bursting to be expressed from my aching heart.

It was a week from our JS Prom, we were seated at the branch of an oak tree drying ourselves after our afternoon swim when she said, "I was wondering Chris if you would like to be my partner?" It just got out of my wits for it was like a dream I never thought would happen. It took me awhile to answer her, "I thought there are so many boys who would die for you to be their partner?" So she turned away and quietly said, "Well I just thought I would like to spend that night with my best friend." Then she continued in a whisper I could barely hear, "Don't you want to die just like them to be my partner Chris?" I was too stunned to speak for it came close for me to blurt my feelings for her. We… we're silent for a while until I finally whispered, "I would be happy to be your partner Sam. "The she smiled and suddenly kissed my cheek. I could hardly contain the joy I felt that time. I saw her turned red and bowed her head. Suddenly she stood up and run towards the water saying, "Last one to reach the water treats to sundae fudge!”I ran slowed up so that I would lose which meant having to have her with me for another three hours or more.

Our Prom night came. I bought a new tuxedo and poured almost the entire bottle of perfume. I went to fetch Sam. Sam's mother greeted me and I went to sit in the living room waiting for her to come down. I was talking to her father when I heard her say, "How do I look?" I look up and saw her lovelier than ever in a strapless white dress with her hair flowing around her face. I stood up and opened my mouth but found out I could not find my voice. Then I got her hand shakily fastened the corsage around her wrist and whispered, "To the loveliest girl in the whole world." She then asked, "Is that true?" I nodded and she smiled and I smiled back then I turned to open the door for her. When we arrived at the gymnasium we hardly recognized our classmates. Gone were the jeans and T-shirts. They were replaced with tuxedos and gowns. Then I held out her hand bowed and said, "Would you give me the honor of your first dance?" She laughed and curtseyed. Then I led her to the dance floor. It was like a dream coming true, a moment of enchantment. I was there dancing with the only girl I ever loved. She was smiling up to me, as we were slowly moving in a smooth gliding motion. I found myself lost as I stared down to her sparkling eyes. The curls of her long hair were like waves enhancing her beautiful face. There were so many things I wanted to tell her that moment. I wanted to tell that she was the most beautiful girl that night. I wanted to tell her that she would always be the beacon of light in my darkness, but what I wanted to tell her the most was that I love her. I drew up all my courage and bent to whisper it in her ear but suddenly the music stopped and the magic was gone. I came close to telling her, but still haven't done it.

We walked towards the table and found ourselves surrounded by friends. I asked her if she wanted a drink, she nodded and so I went to get one. It took me a long time to get one and when I returned to our table, she was gone. I asked her friend, Katie, where she was but she told me that she doesn't know. So I went to search for her. As I was searching for her, I reached the garden. There I saw two silhouette figures outlined by the moon's silvery light. They were so close to each other that I could never describe the feeling I had when I recognized the white dress that Sam was wearing that night. I just turned and left the gymnasium.

Since that night, I avoided her. Many times she tried talking to me but I never gave her the chance to do so. I was afraid to hear her say that she loves Mark and not me. I would rather have left in ignorance of her true feelings for me than to hear from those dreaded words and feel my hope crush and my heart break. I didn't return her calls. I would not see her if she comes into our house. In the hallways, as she approaches I would go to another direction. It also hurts to do those things but then I thought that was the best way to forget her. Those months were tormenting but still I kept my pride.

The day of our graduation came. I was planning to take up medicine at a neighboring state and was to move out the next day. As the program ended, she approached me and handed me a rose. As she stared at me, there was something in her eyes I couldn't describe. There was sadness in them and when she smiled it wasn't the same smile she had. I wanted to hug her at that moment, tell her that I love her but then she turned and walked away from me.

So I moved out the next day as I planned. Luckily, I was accepted at the university. I concentrated with my studies but still I think of her at night. I was always wondering if she thinks of me too. I tried hard not to think of her but still I could not stop myself from loving her. Each achievement I have was done for her. I thought that if I will be successful one day, I would be able to tell her that I love her and by that time, I'm worthy of having her.

It was a year after our graduation when I decided to return home and see her again. I thought a year is too much for me not to see her and during the past year I felt like a person lost in the desert and only the sight of her could quench the thirst I have inside. As I got off the plane, I went home directly, desperate to get to her house desperate to see her, to hug her. Then I would tell her that I missed her and that I have loved her for a long time. This time I am determined to let her know my true feelings for her and I could not contain anymore the love I have for her. I reached their house; I saw her elder sister and I approached her. I smiled at her but I noticed she didn't smile back. I was confused for she used to be a cheerful lady just like my dear Sam. I then asked, "Hi Jen! I guess you're surprised why I'm here. Well I just want to visit you and I was also hoping to see Sam. I kind of miss her you know. Mmm… by the way have you seen her?" All I saw was sadness in her eyes as she replied quietly "Come follow me."

I was confused with the way she's acting but still I followed her. As we were walking, I was trying to indulge her in a conversation but she just answered my question briefly. Then I realized that she was leading me to the direction of the lake. It was still the same as I left it, with the same oak tree, Sam and I used to climb up. I smiled upon remembering the kiss Sam gave me when I agreed to be her partner. It's been one of the happiest days in my life and I realized that I missed Sam more than I thought. Then Jen stopped walking and pointed to the tree. She then whispered, "There's Sam."

I looked at where she was pointing and saw a newly dug tomb with the name of the girl I ever loved. I could not believe at what I saw and desperately tried convincing myself that this is all just a nightmare and I would soon wake up. I stared at Jenny in disbelief with her eyes searching for explanations and she slowly started saying, "It has been a week since she died. She died of Leukemia, but even though she was sick, she never stopped thinking about you. It was even your name she uttered before she died. She asked us to bury her here for she always regards this place as a place of LOVE. She said that this is where she had spent the happiest days and that was when she was with you. By the way, she also asked me to give you this." She handed me a parcel and with that she left.

I slowly opened the parcel and saw that it contained the dried orchid from the corsage I gave her for our prom. Then at the bottom I saw a letter. It was dated last month. I opened it with shaking hands and started reading........


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I know… by this time you read this letter I'm gone. I just want to tell you that I feel very lucky and thankful to God that I had a friend like you. I would also like you to know that I had left something inside, something I kept from you all these years. I love you Chris, not in a friendly way but as one who would feel like spending the rest of my life with. I have always loved you even from the start. I guess it just bloomed each day that's why the happiest days of my life was… when you were by my side. You just don't know how I dreamed of you at night and wake up in the morning and dream no more for you were with me. When you were away, I can't stop crying because I was afraid to think that you are with another girl. I just can't bear to see you with another girl. I just want you all to myself. I may sound selfish but that's how I feel.

Each time, you held me close to you, was like a dream coming true, for to be close to you and feel your heart beating next to mine was like heaven. So many things I did so that you will learn to love me but I NEVER saw a hint. I did everything to please you because I love you so much that I even tried to fool myself that you're in love with me too. So many nights I've cried when I think of myself unloved by you. Well you might think that what I'm saying are lies but, I tell you, my heart speaks the truth for I cannot bear telling a lie to the one I love. I know you might be thinking of Mark; but I just did that to make you jealous, to make you see me as a young woman, capable of loving and not as the little girl you used to play with. Sometimes I imagined that you were jealous and fooled myself that it was a sign that you feel something for me too. When Mark and I broke up and I came crying, I just did that to know… how you would react and with that I'll know that you love me too. But I failed for you didn't give me any clue. When our prom night came, you just don't know how happy I was when you handed me the corsage and saying that I was the loveliest girl in the whole world. While we were dancing, I wanted so desperately to hear you say that you love me too but you NEVER did. When Mark came and pleaded me to give him a second chance, I was scared that you might see us talking. I didn't want you to get the wrong impression so I told him we would talk in the garden. There I explained to him that it's you whom I really love.

What happened next was that I found you missing and later learned that you were searching for me, I just concluded that you saw us together. The next day, I tried to explain but then you never gave me a chance to do so. You continuously avoided me and never knew how much pain I've experienced that time. I felt the world crushing on me. In our Graduation day, when I approached you, I wanted to tell you… how much I loved you but I decided that I just couldn't do it. I could not bear to hear that all you feel for me is just brotherly hand of love. For I want you to love me as a woman and not as a girl or playmate. So I just turned away and left.

Now that saying I LOVE YOU might be too late, but still I want you to know that I will always love you and my heart has always been and will be yours alone.

P.S.: Think of me sometimes... and always remember that loving you was the best thing that ever happened in my life.
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I felt my tears falling as I folded the letter. I wanted to shout out to let her know that I love her, if not as much, but more than she did for me. I love her more than anything in this world. I knelt touching the soil of her grave and rain started to fall. I continued crying softly and whispered, "Oh God, send my love to heaven."

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      mheanne.. 9 years ago

      oh my god i luv u n...^_^

      i don't know wat 2 react but then u made me cry huhuhuhu...

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      Emily 9 years ago

      That was a beautiful story. 

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      mEd.♥ 9 years ago

      iTs sO tOucHIng mAhn...i aLmOSt cRy..

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      ARNELIA 8 years ago

      A VERY TOUCHING STORY...I LUV IT..HUHU

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      mijun07 8 years ago

      dude i try to read it all just to know what gonna happen..i think many people who gonna read this..would be inspired..try to make more

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      jesn 8 years ago

      wow!!! it was the saddest yet inspiring story i ever read!!!!

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      how to increase vertical 8 years ago

      The real pain of life comes when is whehter to wait for the loved one's or to forget... you made me to cry...

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      Alliexandrianne 8 years ago

      The Story was so sad!!!!!

      But it was beautiful and touching,,,,,

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      rea 8 years ago

      it was oh so touching....i love the story...

      it was really sad..

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      bob 8 years ago

      i felt like the man in the story i am so in love with my childhood friend she knows it. but she has a boyfriend and i don't want to ruin their relationship. it hurts for i know that she luvs me too...

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      nica 8 years ago

      wow, what an amazing love story.

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      say 8 years ago

      huhuhu..you really made me cry..,

      I was touched by this story..,

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      ms.sHArpay 8 years ago

      ammm veRY TOUchING pEO aNG hava eh pede VANG pAKIIKsiAN

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      sheer 8 years ago

      huhuh! it really did make e cry! how i wish u knew u love each other from the start..

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      Jerome  8 years ago

      OuCh!!

      It`s ReAlLy gOod,,

      huhuhuhu

      i`m a boy but still cry bcoz of ur story,,

      Very NiCe StorY huh.

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      charlie 8 years ago

      jujuju. . it makes me cry. SH$#%$&T.

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      meLBAcaLiL 7 years ago

      nyc story but not as nice as this

      There was a blind girl who hated herself just because she was blind. She hated everyone, except her loving boyfriend. He was always there for her. She said that if she could only see the world, she would marry her boyfriend.

      One day, someone donated a pair of eyes to her and then she could see everything, including her boyfriend. Her boyfriend asked her, "now that you can see the world, will you marry me?" The girl was shocked when she saw that her boyfriend was blind too, and refused to marry him.

      Her boyfriend walked away in tears, and later wrote a letter to her saying..... "Just take care of my eyes dear." i'll always love you forever " ....

      short but touching

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      Jasmine 7 years ago

      That was a beautiful story. I actually cried, it was amazing and so sad.

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      thirteenrevenge13 7 years ago from Philippines

      @meLBAcaLiL thanks but hmmm it would be kinda more touching if you make it a bit longer or perhaps give some more details.. but nice story though.. and thanks for the comment

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      C0de D 7 years ago

      woah...some parts of the story actually happened to me, like the prom thing(except for the corsage thing, never had the chance to ask her out) and the part where she got a guy with him(man that was an awful, unpleasant, depressing kind of feeling) anyway, it was all good!

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      shade  7 years ago

      this story made me open my eyes to a lot i don't want to lose him i love him and i need to tell him but don't know how

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      von 7 years ago

      it made me cry!!

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      rae 7 years ago

      hey is this a true to life love story..

      i mean did it really happen to u thirteenrevenge?!

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      anonymous 7 years ago

      wow! you should continue writing!

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      her. 7 years ago

      ill spread the story ;) very touching

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      carolyn 7 years ago

      you made me cry :(

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      annjelica 7 years ago

      awwwwwww :( im currently crying.. love this sooo much ??

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      B1B2 7 years ago

      I wANT tO cRY BECAUSE OF IT

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      chen 7 years ago

      OMG!! Never did I noticed, My tears are falling..

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      derpy 7 years ago

      copy and paste. thanks for the home work help

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      tep_008 7 years ago

      so typical love story.

      yes its sad.

      but the setting and.. everything is so..

      common.

      you could tell the ending from the first

      set of events.

      sorry.

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      alex 7 years ago

      great story. sad but good. made me realize some things.

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      nj 7 years ago

      huh,i want to cry.it knocks my foolish heart

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      cj akiko 7 years ago

      good work.!

      i got inspired,

      im a fellow writer too,

      nice and keep up d gud work men.!

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      josyl 7 years ago

      oh God! thid story really made my heart cry... i know how much it hurts to hav lost someone you really did love..let me cry wid u...

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      Frei 7 years ago

      not good story...

      sorry..but i think this story can't be called beautiful.

      please tell me what's the meaning of beautiful..

      it makes me cry..

      i hate this story it gives me such a pain like what author felt..

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      yuki  7 years ago

      a very nice story

      moral lesson:

      always have faith, never asure on things right away.

      take the chances.

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      kei takishima 7 years ago

      it's a very touching story

      it is beautiful...

      when you love one person, go nit wait and be hesitant to tell and show your true feelings, because no one knows... what would happen next...

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      mhea 7 years ago

      you made me cry..huhuhu

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      mhea 7 years ago

      you made me cry..huhuhu

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      margaret 7 years ago

      i guess it put me to tears because i can feel the characters alive in me...

      i wish i am not too late...

      but i guess i already am

      my cheeks are so full of tears

      it was really good

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      rupesh + muna 7 years ago

      every relation start wid love and care...but they don't have meaning in life...every relation are made to me tragic...!!!!

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      cherie 7 years ago

      crying!!!! ;'( beautiful story...i wanted to read more but still beautiful story :'(

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      Rey A. Mangarin 7 years ago

      I have already read it somewhere in the net sites four years ago..it's title is "Send My Love to Heaven"..but I love the story

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      Andy Isabella 6 years ago

      tht is soo adorable...i wanted to cryy

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      Renz Arbie 6 years ago

      ..urgh!!..

      ..sooo sad story..

      ..i wish is not too late for us..:'(

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      Shelly 6 years ago

      ... I literally started to cry...D:

      it's a sad story...

      I can relate to this story really well...

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      ken feolog 6 years ago

      you are a good writer, i hope you wil write many to inspirre the world that keeping of feelinggs are not good

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      Diya... 6 years ago

      dat wuz really amazing...!!!

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      janE 6 years ago

      wOw.. d sTory is so aMazinG iT reaLly maDe me cRy...,.,.,

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      ira 6 years ago

      it's very touching....i love it!huhuhu..can't stop my tears

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      mystic 6 years ago

      It's super inspiring. although it has a sad ending,still, it touches my heart. i've leraned a lesson from it.....................

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      mystic 6 years ago

      It's super inspiring. although it has a sad ending,still, it touches my heart. i've leraned a lesson from it.....................

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      karina 6 years ago

      owww :(

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      nothing........ 6 years ago

      ......the best tragic story ever.......sometimes we need to be honest,honest in a way that every second would be possible to each others arm....love is forever be in our hearts until our last breath.......

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      nothing........ 6 years ago

      ......the best tragic story ever.......sometimes we need to be honest,honest in a way that every second would be possible to each others arm....love is forever be in our hearts until our last breath.......

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      Applewannabe 6 years ago

      Omg i really liked it.......=(

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      hussein 6 years ago

      what can i say

      it made me cry:(

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      Lookin4luv 6 years ago

      Ohhhh, i can't believe this happened. it's such a beautiful story! i cried so badly.... still amm!! T~T

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      aishwarya 6 years ago

      huuhuhuhhu that was actually an amazing story ...may u get back ur luv in nxt birth.........luv hurts a lot

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      Jill coyoty 6 years ago

      i love this story so much//

      it's just very similar to my life ...

      love sb but cannot express...

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      unknown 6 years ago

      I'd read this story way back 5 years ago. Its title is "SEND MY LOVE TO HEAVEN" and indeed it is the best love story I have ever read. The irony of the story is exemplary and so touching.

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      sweet16 6 years ago

      Seriously! I almost cried... But my sister will say that I'm weird. Post more! =)

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      ordinarygirl 6 years ago

      really!! wow... it is interesting but i cant understand a little bit...who doing this?

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      irue 6 years ago

      .watery eyes i have :(

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      irue 6 years ago

      .watery eyes i have :(

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      tina 6 years ago

      this story made me cry..,,i've lerned a lot.

      it's really true that regrets felt in the end.

      and for all the person who's hiding their feelings from one person just say it while it's still early rather than regret in the end.

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      Gabriel 6 years ago

      FFS.....i f@kin cried abit. : P

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      shraveni 6 years ago

      its such atuching story.............it made me cry

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      jhoi 6 years ago

      so xad ;(( the story indeed make my heart skip a bit from beating...

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      karizmatic enigma 6 years ago

      really the bst story evr read by me

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      Vimal 6 years ago

      It was really very touching!!!

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      febbie 6 years ago

      cant stop crying with this

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      Siri 6 years ago

      Oh god very sad i am getting a bucket of tears in my eyes.

      I think dis story is too big

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      honey02 5 years ago

      this story made me cry...

      so sad...

      so if you love someone tell to that person wat u really feel,

      before its too late...

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      GIRL THE BOY LOVED 5 years ago

      WOW!!!!!!!!!

      AMAZING STORY

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      Babybash 5 years ago

      huhuhuhu..it really made me cry..i wish i have more time to finish the story but i cant cause i still have a class to attend...ill tell my friends to read this very touching story....ill continue reading it later after my class..soooo touching!!! :'(

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      HTAQAYIL 5 years ago

      Very sad story ,

      iam praying to GOD not to make me blind . Bcoz i want to see my lover lamya whenever i want

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      jeca 5 years ago

      i almost cried ... so touching!!!!

      i like it !!! ):

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      bling20 5 years ago

      i love this story..jujujuju..

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      misaXamane 5 years ago from Philippines

      great story. :)

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      zhAijAzZ01 5 years ago

      how touchin' huhuhuh

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      Nindesu 5 years ago

      I love this story, made me so much.

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      Mango XMunYuan 5 years ago

      I really indulge by this story... although now it happening almost same story on me...I try not to loose any chances that GOD had gave....It really hard to understand if the boy story happen in you...

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      sir awsome 5 years ago

      very nice... but i have no tears to cry, sry..

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      jowa 5 years ago

      oh my God!!!this story made me cry...i cant hardly find a word to describe how i feel,,,its a mix emotion of love,hapiness and regret...how i wish they have both d courage to tell each ader of their feelings b4 time and destiny told them its over and their time and chances is up..haaayyy...

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      jowa 5 years ago

      @thirteenrevenge13...nice story...

      its amazing!

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      lee 5 years ago

      thanks for sharing. Though its not your original story.

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      girlthatcriesalot 5 years ago

      wow. is this story true?

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      kylebitch:P 5 years ago

      dude this stories to deep....

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      bossrenz 5 years ago

      hoohh.. shit.. this story s so very nice.. i cant stop crying while reading this story.. huhuhuh

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      Grn mnded 5 years ago

      Many parts are turning me ON!!! Yeah baby!! because he said they are good playmates.

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      rizwan 5 years ago

      i have never comment to a love story...but this one bound me to do so.....after reading the half i have imagined all..it was correct too.....but i must appreciate the words explaining the emotions just marvelous...thank you for this ,a masterpiece of tragic lovestory

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      Neo 5 years ago

      Nice story...

      i realize something...

      maybe we should be honest.

      but problem is fear of rejection buildup boundaries.

      ending up to self denial.

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      EmlEt98 5 years ago

      It was the best tragic love story next to romeo and juliet, it actually made me cry for the first time in months!!!

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      Sara 5 years ago

      Touching story!! Made me cry in the end !! Really felt soory for tne guy

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      aenna 5 years ago

      it made me cry.. :'(

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      vish 5 years ago

      oh! mahn what to say about this story . i don't have any words to say for it , but still its the best story i ever read . its inspiring and i was tocry after reading this story

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      jenny 5 years ago

      at first it makes me bored to read....too long the intro..:(

      but later on...ending part is amazing !!

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      Saravana 5 years ago

      Humans will cry reading this eternal story:(

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      mani 5 years ago

      It seem to be a true story

      i will remember it forever

      coz it is the first love story i have read

      I really started crying after reading this story.

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      M.A 4 years ago

      You're a perfect writer..It's very tragic story :'(

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      rachel 4 years ago

      oh my goodness!!! Its amazing. SOOO touching. I loved it and its absolutely brilliant! I am really trying not to cry right now its so sad and sweet! i'm a hopeless romantic and i've read many, many love stories, but this was undoubtedly the best yet. Thank you for posting it!!!

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      silah 4 years ago

      awesome.....

      may i copy this story??? for my english task.. please.. :)

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      NOKZA 4 years ago

      WOW IM TOUCHED AND SPEECHLESS REMEMBERING MY FIRST CRUSH ENDED UP DATING HIS FRND JST FOR HIM TO NOTICED DAT I LOVED HIM BUT HE NEVER DID

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      rukiya 4 years ago

      i really lovd it... u made me so emotionl... story made me cry....

      ;-)

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      Maureen 4 years ago

      Oh my....that was a pretty cool story...you made me cry..

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      I'mFrancisce 4 years ago

      Oh, it really did make me cry :'(

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      Chelsey 4 years ago

      Could you give the author's name?

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      skaterboy21 3 years ago

      very touching

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      Phil 3 years ago

      :( This really saddens me.

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      Darey 3 years ago

      Sht! this wonderful story really saddens me and it made me cry :'(

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      Darey 3 years ago

      Sht! this wonderful story really saddens me and it made me cry :'(

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      J-miched 3 years ago

      It's nice story ;and it is so very touching story both of the character..and i hope so more power to the author of this story..

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      korina 3 years ago

      Lovely story it made me cry well now my home work is easy hehehe*)

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      jammel 3 years ago

      i like it so much...

      nakakaiyak...

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      leena 3 years ago

      so damn awsome story.... just luved it....

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      lovelee 3 years ago

      i wanna share something with u guys..... facebook is sooooo popular these days... n we meet those unknown people on fb who becum ou really good friend... once i got a request n i accepted it..... he was from delhi n i stay in bangalore.... we started chating for long long times.... yes ofcourse we should not believe on fb unknown friends so soon but he had sme quality which made me believe n trust him.... after some time after sme days passed away.... we both knew each other more than ourselves.... one day i came back late from my college but soon logged in and saw many mesgs sent by him... he had written that if ever he dies then he wants to see me at his last time he want to take his last breath with me.... and all such things made me feel a bit scared n nervous... i did not know how to react.... he was online too.... he text me hi... i replied him hi too but did not discuss nythng about his previous mesgs..... he said me that he wants to tell me something.. i got scared n told him that i wanna tell him smethng before he tells me... he text me ok tell... i just simply said that a boy has proposed me in college n he is soooo caring he luvs me a lot... n i asked him to suggest me about how to reply to his proposal... there was no boy who had proposed me in my college.... he text me "don't ask me about this i will not be able to tell u anything" i asked him y cant u tell me u r my friend na wont u help me.... he said" i cant help u with this because i love u" i was damn scared i said what are u telling i never thought u more than a friend... i m sory i cant tell nythng to u know... he just sent a smily n said its ok it doesn't mean that if i luv u i must have u in my life.. love is also sacrifice... but still i will believe that u will one day come to me for sure because i truly love you... i did not reply nythng to him n just unfriended him... but today i find him every day in fb and i still did not get him.. i always remember his last mesgs he had sent me... they make me fall down in front of myself.... :( :( :( :( . i did not know what to do but know i believe that his love was true n i love him too... but know he is gone :'( :'(' :'(... i would just pray god with true heart that werever n however he is plzzzzzzz keep him happy n make all his wishesh come true.....

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      Manisha 3 years ago

      I never read like this lovable and tragic story forever,i think it's a real life story.And also real love story.This is the best ..................

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      dharma 3 years ago

      This is heart touching story. I really like this n some what it matches to my life as well. Any way thnx to the writer

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      christian king 3 years ago

      not a happy ending story and yet a story full of lessons and happenings that we all know sometimes happening in our life.......yes its true....this is a heart touching story.....and honestly.....it makes my tears fell as I read each words..specially at the near end part.......I love reading a story like this...... THANKS !!!!

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      angel 3 years ago

      Same situation is happening with me dat a guy always says dat he loves me truly.. N he prv dat he does... Sometym my frnds said dat i usd to lyk him.... But m not xcptng dis 1.. So tell me wht can i do...

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      khando 3 years ago

      really a sad n wantin story

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      Mrun 3 years ago

      Wow........!Is really awesome.... keep writing much More........

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      Ella 3 years ago

      I love u!

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      naik bilal 2 years ago

      Heart touching story,it bleeded my heart,perhaps i m the sailer of same

      boat,it is very difficult to take any decision in true love,it kills and burns u inside.

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      Suzan Paul 2 years ago

      It is the most tragic story ever I have read or heard of. I am so touched by the story that it made my heart so weak specially the letter of Sam. I cried for 15 mins and could not come out of it for an hour. I will never forget it.

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      2 years ago

      Swallow your pride

      Tell him/her how you feel.

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      2 years ago

      If you liked this you should watch "5 centimeters per second"

      absolutely beautiful

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      pepzfly 2 years ago

      love is unexpecting

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      sanchita kochar 2 years ago

      it is jus awesum....luv it lyk anythin..

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      Aggrey 18 months ago

      Love always bondly and painful to flashback at times. Wish passion was...God

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      15 months ago

      hah no words to describe

      fabulousss

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      LS 10 months ago

      Heart touching story and sad

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