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Creatures Prowling

Updated on March 8, 2018


What's there to do when,
Light's from darkness go down
Without it- I'm lost
As so much evil,
Prowls- 2,000 days more
Sore & alone afraid. No more doors
Vacant, unseen creatures
Roam among innocent people, innocent victims
Go ahead and try, pull a bag over my eyes
It's my time now to stand in line
To sound out these vowels
Hear my Name when you're alone
In beautiful silence,
As I roam..........
In the Darkness.

© 2010 Dom Shadows

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      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Everyone ty so much for these insightful words..

      Chris.. I would love to be a professional song writer.. I still need help..

      Denizee--> Can you help me with structure?

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      Cris A 

      9 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      I've read the previous installments to your "shorts" series and I decided to post my comment here (the latest but hopefully not the last) to avoid repeating what I have to say.

      Like I said before your poetry are songs - I can almost hear a beat when I read them and the lines are short, crisp and loaded.

      Thanks for sharing. I hope there's more to come from your dark corner.

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      Denizee 

      9 years ago

      Interesting, it's a written expression of pain, relationship pain I imagine, or just dismayed with life in general. Very deep emotions - dark thoughts of life, penned into a poetic form. Nice job. I would work on structure now to make your poem stand out.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      9 years ago from Great Britain

      Most enjojable as always. x

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      mistrunner 

      9 years ago

      Good mate good as usual your a pleasure to read

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      getmyback 

      9 years ago

      Oh Ya, Now I want to need a songwriter, let's hook up and spin some lyrics together. Just need to get settled and organized, strum, sing, write, I can do but lost at everything else here. Thanks Dom, beautiful stuff.

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