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SWEATING ROSE

Updated on August 25, 2012

A walk through the rosy crop,

A talk to the tiny drop,


Convey me the story of,

Love and blossom on its top,


Is it your youth’s blossom course?

I asked the beautiful sweating rose,


Or is it love tear that pops,

Beneath your eyes in tiny drops,

Is it the labor, to growing call?

Or is it the natures, love that fall,



Is it my prayer, or is my care,

That I see, on leaking layer,


Is wetness upon, witnesses long?

The deepen roots of sin that moan,



The drop I had, when slips my arm,

Answers the Rose, I gain my charm,

Its sweat or is the gracious calm,

Layered on me, to wash my palm,



With these fingers, peaks on arm,

I hug your dreams, with loving alarm,



I wet in reason to fill your dry,

And so I sweat and so I cry,



In all I learned from creator’s course,

Is love thy base of Sweating Rose……….

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Beautiful poem with such pretty roses.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Lovely poetry, beautiful rose. Loved it..

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks writer....i have been away from internet, hope to read ur hubs too.

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks dear......its a very deep poem...with all the lesson god gives to us to explore the real love , taking course from the nature

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. The rose is a wonderful flower.

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks gypsy... hru

      rose is really the heart of lovers..

      lets u to love some one..silently

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Moneycop

      Exquisite!

      Voted up and away

      Take care

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks sues...a bit busy these day..will revert to u soon

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      Linda Cassini 4 years ago from Las Vegas NV

      Poetry as beautiful as the flowers themselves :) keep enjoying your Universe :)

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      Thanks LINDA....keep comming my UNIVERSE is full of LOVE n real HAPPINESS

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Beautiful words, very captivating and exquisitely penned. Voting up and sharing.

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      rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      A lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose

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      moneycop 3 years ago from JABALPUR

      THNX CRISP.....FORWARD TO READ UR HUBS TOO....DO READ MY OTHER POEMS , THEY REALLY COUNT, FOR PEOPLE WHO WANT OR BELIEVE IN REAL LOVE

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      moneycop 3 years ago from JABALPUR

      THNX ROSE, READ MY OTHER POEMS ALSO, I AM SURE IT WILL ENLIGHT U WITH HEART AND MIND BOTH

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      Sunil Kumar Kunnoth 3 years ago from Calicut (Kozhikode, South India)

      What a beautiful expression! Too charming and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your wonderful feeling through this lovely poem. Keep on writing.

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      moneycop 2 years ago from JABALPUR

      yes sunil i will write soon

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