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SaDness

Updated on October 20, 2009

 SADDNESS

 

Saddness is like a deep sea,

Waves breaking inside me.

Solid perfuse tears I weep

No hands brushes them away

And,

Deep they seep.

I am alone,

With a lovely soul in my way

Over my fate I’ve no say

Darkness a veil upon my success

As it takes all my devotions away.

 

In Pauls I’m friendly,

While I’m desolate and vacantly alone.

 

My feelings die away

My emotions sedated,

I think,

I ponder

If God made us all the same,

then why is so unloved my Name??

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      thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      Omg! I love this poem! It's beautifully...sad...Definitely feel the pain in your words. Thank you for such beautiful work! I'm very drawn to sadness...not because I enjoy it...well, I am fascinated on how others express our unwanted friend, "sadness". Thank you...

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      thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      Oh and I love the picture!!! It's captivating...makes you take a second glance and feel the emotions without hearing any words...

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thanks thanglynn07 for your words, I really love to write poetry and read it because it takes to depth of things.. you also have good taste in such regard

      Ya this picture is also Fine, I got it after hard time spent in searching the best image i could find to match my words

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      thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      You're very welcome! Just giving credit where it deserves! Job well done!

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thanks Again

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thanks Again

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      Eidul Ameen Bin Sahul Hamid 7 years ago from Part Buntar, Malaysia

      Good Poem,

      Good story below to make remove sadness and not to be too happy. Cheers.

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/This_too_shall_pass

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thanks I read it

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      Kebennett1 7 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

      Awesome poem. Very deep. you can really feel it!

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thanks kebennett1

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Tender is the human heart. Very nice poetry. I like this.

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Oh thank U for liking it !!

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      Boo McCourt 7 years ago from Washington MI

      very sad poem, I completely understand it. Good work.

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thank U !!

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      Elena 7 years ago from London, UK

      .... and I hope you see the Sun shine soon.

      What a beautiful but, sad poem.

      Regards.

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      nilum 7 years ago

      Thank u Lady_E for liking

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      deepanjana 7 years ago

      Sweetest pleasure is perhaps pain .. thanks for such a wonderful hub

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      nilum 7 years ago

      :-) Feelings are always to be expressed

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      nilum 7 years ago

      :-) Feelings are always to be expressed

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