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Sadness is the Color of

Updated on March 6, 2010

Beauty with Freckles

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Sadness is the Color of ...



Red is the colour of love and boldness.
Green is the colour of youth and summer.
Blue is the colour of my deep thoughts and memories.
Brown is the colour of Janice's hair and freckles.
Sweetness is the colour of a gentle upward curve at each corner of her mouth.
Loveliness is the colour of her small nose set below her round glittering eyes.
Happiness is the colour of laughing together, sharing careless small talks.
Coolness is the colour of the gentle breeze on our backs, so close together.
Warmness is the colour of her slender fingers, held between mine.
Yearning is the colour of my flushed face waiting at her door.
Satisfaction is the colour of the sight of Janice coming out of her house.
Sadness is the colour of my eyes when she said,
"I really like you a lot. Will you go out with my mother and become my father?" 

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    • Teresa Laurente profile image

      Maria Teresa Rodriguez - Laurente 7 years ago from San Antonio, Texas, U.S.A.

      Beautiful thought.

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      Benson Yeung 7 years ago from Hong Kong

      Hi Teresa Laurente,

      thanks for commenting.

      Good to see you.

    • spryte profile image

      spryte 7 years ago from Arizona, USA

      :) I love the way you caught me by surprise at the end. Is it evil of me to have giggled? *hugs*

    • Benson Yeung profile image
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      Benson Yeung 7 years ago from Hong Kong

      Hi spryte,

      good to see you. Is it evil of you? No way, you're always adored.

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      LizzyBoo 7 years ago from Czech Republic

      Hello there, I love it! It is very nice, even short. You just proved that less is sometimes more. Thank you for sharing those lovely words. Lizzy

    • Benson Yeung profile image
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      Benson Yeung 7 years ago from Hong Kong

      Hello LizzyBoo,

      glad that you like the short piece.

      Good to see you.

      Benson

    • Theresea Hughes profile image

      Theresea Hughes 6 years ago

      HI there, enjoyable... Great ending ... keep em all guessin

    • Benson Yeung profile image
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      Benson Yeung 6 years ago from Hong Kong

      Hi Theresea Hughes,

      thanks for your kind comments.

      Good to see you.

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      blondepoet 6 years ago from australia

      Wow Benson you have such a sweet sweet side. Guess that is what I love about my favorite doctor. :)

    • Benson Yeung profile image
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      Benson Yeung 6 years ago from Hong Kong

      Hi blondepoet,

      thanks for commenting. This piece must seem somewhat silly to someone conversant with poetry, like your goodself.

      Good to see you.

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