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Saw I to resolve!

Updated on April 17, 2015

Saw I ...

an ant

dragging a booty,

took off its burden

in my aching eyes;



a crow

cawing for food,

dry went

my hungry throat;



a child

dozing with a book,

nullified my brain

all knowledge;



a flower

crushed under a foot,

flushed my cheeks

with anger;



my beauty

with roaming eyes,

flat I fell off-guard

to injure my pride!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx al n nel

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx al n nel

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      Your writing is beautiful and your style is captivating. I felt every well-chosen, restrained word and each word's determination. ~

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You saw much today. Is all resolved? Clever and meaningful..