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Screw off sucker

Updated on August 16, 2012
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Aren’t I supposed to tell you how I feel?

Aren’t you supposed to care?

Aren’t you supposed to be there?

‘Cause it’s obvious you don’t care

Your there but you might as well not be

You say you’re there for me

But I don’t feel it

I don’t see it

Your just there for you

And I don’t think its fair

That I’m always there

When you need someone

To talk to someone

And I care when you’re sad

Or when you’re mad

But you, you just let it be

You don’t care for me

And let me drown in my tears

But all is good and dandy

‘Cause I’m as sweet as candy

And I know it very well

Too bad you can’t tell

But when you realize

You will no longer hear my cries

I’ll be long gone loving myself

And only myself

And you can screw off sucker :p

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks a lot NateB11!! :)

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      Nathan Bernardo 5 years ago from California, United States of America

      I like the directness of this poem and it's rhythm, and also it's feeling. To me, those kinds of things are essential in poetry.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      A.A.Zavala, sorry to make you feel like that! lol, you're right one day we'll get what's deserved for us, what goes around comes around right? Thanks for reading!

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      Augustine A Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

      Wow, felt like I was in trouble while reading this.

      Yes, we can be selfish, and have only one thing on our mind. But one day we will grow up and be on the receiving end of what we dish out. We deserve it.

      Beautiful poem...

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Guys always say that we think too much, maybe he doesn't know your feelings are more intimate?

      That's kind of cute that people say that about you guys, maybe theres something more there that you just don't see but everyone else sees! Relationships are all crazy sometimes whether it be friends or lovers, as humans we are all messed up! lol

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      HL Keeley 5 years ago from Charlotte, NC

      Thanks. Yeah, he tells me that I think too much into things. I just retort with "You do not think enough!" People always laugh at us saying that we balance each other out and that we remind them of their grandparents. We are great friends, but it is tough because my feelings for him are more...intimate? I guess is the best word.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thank you so much HLKeeley, I'm happy you liked it because I was so hesitant to post my poems at first, but I figured screw it let me just put them up!

      Sorry your guy friend sucks, I think a lot of guys are like this and I don't know if all of them mean to be like this or not. I think girls are more sensitive so we think about these types of things, but to guys its like Greek to them, they just don't understand sometimes. I believe in any relationship both parties should give and receive or its not fair! Hope it turns around for you, or you find someone else better to talk to! Best wishes :) And your an awesome writer yourself!

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      HL Keeley 5 years ago from Charlotte, NC

      I love this poem. (Yeah you have a new fan...lol)

      It reminds me of my relationship with a guy here at school. He is there for me to talk to, but I dont know why he listens. It does not seem like he cares. It feels like he does it just because that is the Christian way. He does not see when I am upset or asks, yet I know him like a book even with all his walls. I am so tired of trying so hard for a friendship that I do not even know exists.

      This is wonderful. I absolutely adore your writing.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks shiningirisheyes!

      People can make you feel a certain way sometimes but if you know what you are and you have confidence in yourself, you won't let anything or anyone get you down! You'll do whats important for yourself and that's all that matters in the end.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Yes!!! You go girl! Great empowering write.

      I'm a fan.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      haha thanks Deep Metaphysical :D

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      Deep Biswas 5 years ago from India

      Yeah, tell that sucker!! You go girl. (y)

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      cleaner3, we all are selfish sometimes, its part of being human lol I guess I am selfish too for writing this poem LOL

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Darn it , you caught me , i am so selfish , worrying only about my own love for my woman. LOL

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      hahaa don't worry lord de cross, I'm not a man hater! hehe males are welcome to comment, hehe thanks for stopping by!

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      Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

      Ouch!! That sounded like a cyber slap (jk)...wait a minute; am I the only male commenting?

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Lmao yes haha most men are selfish yet they tell women that they're the selfish ones, thanks for reading ExotichippieQueen!

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      ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

      You got it all out there, didn't you? Don't you wish you could have read it to his face? Most men (not all) are inherently selfish. (Sorry, men).

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      thanks vimsoo3, and thanks for passing by !

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      Vimesh Ummer.U 5 years ago from india

      daring hub.......keep it up.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      haha thanks for checking my hub out simplicity4all! :)

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      Simplicity4All 5 years ago from Rhode Island, USA

      this is adorable and well put, how i would love to recite this to my current boyfriend...errlack! get it girl keep on writing ;P

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks guys, I really appreciate you stopping by and reading :)

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Loved reading this poem, I've been in a relationship like that as well. Also loved the title of the poem, well done !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Philip Cooper 5 years ago from Olney

      Great title..and a nice ditty. Super style.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      nice poetry, Euro, thanks for reading my work. glad i found your hub will read more cause I like you style.

      Michael

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      thanks always exploring, glad you enjoyed it, lol.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      HaHa, HeeHee, Loved it..Way to go girl...

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks tobuisness and dotty1:)

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      dotty1 5 years ago from In my world

      lovely and my kind of poetry

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Love this title, just had to find out more, and I'm so glad I did.

      Love is such a minefield, very well portrayed here.

      Voting up