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Shadows that follow...

Updated on February 8, 2016


Wondering what it should be about
hand in hand... emotions sparkling like snow
the electricity of anticipation pierces...like cold needles...
the wind whispers innuendoes
to the night....

Hurry... hurry...
before the moment is lost
and the colors
turn black and white

Devoid of meaning... fades
and lustful desires... are but
shadows that follow
us...

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      manatita44 15 months ago from london

      Neatness: My way of saying that every word is in place ... nothing is wasted. Excellent poetry!

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      cleaner3 15 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you my friend manatita44

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      Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago

      Beautiful poem!

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      cleaner3 15 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you poetess.... Surabhi...

      I am honored to have you comment..

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      Faith Reaper 15 months ago from southern USA

      Hi again, Michael,

      I love your shadows that follow ...very interesting poem.

      Hugs and blessings,

      Tree

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      cleaner3 15 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Hello Tree....

      Long time no hear from you... I hope all is well.. left a couple of comments on G+ bu never get replies... you post and run...lol

      thank you for visiting my posts... I plan to start posting more on Hubs...

      I pray for your well being ... hugs my friend..

      Michael..

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      Faith Reaper 15 months ago from southern USA

      Oh, I'm sorry, Michael.

      Hahaha, yes, that's me, post and run on G+. I will try to do better.

      Thank you for your prayers. You are sweet to care about my wellbeing.

      Hugs

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      cleaner3 15 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      you need to interact with me on G+.. more often... well you have always been good to me Faith... may god bless you and your family ...

      Michael..

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      Faith Reaper 15 months ago from southern USA

      I will try to do so.

      Well, best get to bed for 5:00 rolls around fast : )

      May God bless you too

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