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She Laid

Updated on October 7, 2012

She walked through the doorway

As I sat up in bed

Thoughts of our wild night

Spinning in my head


Like a cat gliding towards me

As I watched her hips sway

With her mouth still hung open

Her eyes still in loves haze

Her soul purring like a kitten

On my chest she laid


Coiling all around me

Two bodies became one

In a world of passion

Beneath the rising sun

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    • Simba73 profile image
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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Epi you do me greater honour still ......i am so thilled to have you read my work I have an image of you next to your lake with coffe in hand and it gives me a huge boost at the end of a major year of my life , thank you so much !!!!

      Send you all of my wishes and positive energy from across the pond 13.16pm

      Simba

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....very very seductive - the ladies will love this - well actually the lady in me loved it - as I often try to write from the female point of view.

      Your heart and mind is purely poetic - this is a talent you can't teach - you were just born with it. lake erie time ontario canada 8:10am

      and sending you warm wishes ......

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      ;)

      that's all I have to say too

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      surya 5 years ago

      jon i ve no words u made me coy.. tat poem was jus awsm.... loved it....

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Cleaner3 :)

      Great comment

      Simba

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      beautiful love poetry

      I love this sensuous write .

      it fits all my criteria

      love short and sweet words

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Some people seem to get that lucky Shauna, always a friend of a friends cousin or something never us lol

      Give it a go anyway in it !!!

      Love Simba xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Oh, if only life could stay the way love begins!

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks GRL ,

      Love you dropping by as usual :)))

      Love Simba xxx

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Let the sun shine for love.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Coffee thanks so much, creepy ha!!! love it !!!

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Oh man, I could see you both, and that's a creepy situation for me, lol!

      Beautiful!