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She Lies In Pain

Updated on August 4, 2011

Tears caress her cheek
Chest tighten…
Heart aching…
Body shaking…
Life breaking…
Feeling tremble
She falls…
Into the darkness again…

She’s hitting her fist on the floor
Completely drowning
In her own pain…

Asking what have she done…
Continue she complains…

No answer….
Just shadow and reflection
The picture she saw was her own…

She study herself as she look
And what she saw was weakness…
As she died alone…


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi always exploring, these were the broken feeling I felt last I express it in poetry. Thanks. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, I hope this is just poetry. Very deep and beautiful!!

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hello Feenix Thank you! :) I believe I am a deep thinker since a lot of people tell me that. ^_^

      Hi CMerritt- thank you...^_^

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      Chris Merritt 6 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

      I feel like kicking my dog!!!

      Just jokin, that is pretty intense and very deep...I too loved this.

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      feenix 6 years ago


      Wow! You are very deep thinker, aren't you. I really loved this work. It's haunting.